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Traces of Your Touch (An AU Fanfiction) - Comments, page 25

Holy shit..I'm shaking rn! what? Harry and Aria are so freakin hot!! Their chemistry is just.........i cant...nope...done...

You are sssssooooo good i swear! i read your story in one go and i recommended it to all of my friends. i can actually connect the real harry and louis to this story. you have described them so wonderfully that i actually feel like it's real. i love how you made Harry lust for Aria slowly. n didnt make them jump into the bed within the first 3 chapters.....btw who shrieked out like that? amy. right? im so excited for the next chapter. i know it'll get better and better because you always deliver amazing chapters. keep it up. you'll be in the top in no time!
@Niallerx4everx

I know!:( I miss Nathan!
@Rihanna

Trust me. I'm very picky about the stories I like and I thoroughly enjoy your fanfic! I enjoy every single chapter because it is completely unpredictable. I like how you portray bullying as well. Most stories end up making Harry look like a woman abuser! And I'm like, No! I mean Harry would be expelled and arrested in no time if that was the case! Not only that, I've read a fanfic (not mentioning the name) where the girl has like a big gaping wound on her stomach and she's bleeding to death and yet somehow she manages to get up and walk away from school while Zayn follows her home, not even noticing the blood or her crouching. I mean seriously! If I was bleeding, I'd be lying on the floor crying my eyeballs out as I saw my life flash before my eyes!

I also like how you portrayed Aria in the story. Most of the time the OC is super pretty and perfect! But in each chapter we see a new flaw in Aria's character. However, her sweet personality covers up for that. That's how a real character description should be!

As for the latest chapter, oh my god! I think I became a little too hot as I read it! Mostly, other authors write about how Harry sucked on her neck, marking her. And every single time I go like, Seriously? Doesn't she have any other body part he can leave his mark on? And then I read this, and I was like HOLY COW! Never in a million years did I see that coming!

You are doing perfect as it is! Keep going girl! You rock!
@Rihanna
Thank you and you are a really good story writer xxxx
Niall's baby Niall's baby
11/2/13
@Rihanna
im so mad that its over though::(((
Hey! I only just started it... i hope u like it
Harry'sGyrl2015 Harry'sGyrl2015
11/2/13
@Rihanna
HOLD ON!!! I m not exactly as gooood as your are portraying me to be...
Annnnnd you are my friend... OBVIOUSLY I care for you guys... :)

About your story....
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME??????
I mean, on one hand there is Louis; flirty and all.... And then there is Harry being way tooo hot and sexy....
I am seriously thinking how lucky Aria is... Getting sooo much attention....
And the suspense is KILLING me.... I don't know what will happen in the next chapter because whatever I predict, you guys come up with something entirely different....
I want Aria to be with Harry but then I cannot put Louis out of the picture.....
I AM GOING CRAZY thinking about what will happen next...
And the kiss..
You have no idea how much I was wishing to trade places with Aria at that moment.....
AWESOME JOB!!!
You go girls.....
WOOHOO!!!

{Sorry.... I guess I am actually losing my mind... :p}

Buh bye....
LOVE YA.... <3

Looooved the chapter!!!!:) Harry & Aria are adorable. !!!
ChloewuvsHarry ChloewuvsHarry
11/2/13
@Rihanna
Thanks! You don't know how much I appreciate it, I keep forgetting that the authors of the fan fics I read might read mine. :)
@Rihanna
Are you kidding? You are an amazing writer, you keep me wanton more and more:D and not many fanfics do that for me! Each chapter you portray the characters so well, and that's why I love that you do it in 3rd person:D and YESSSS I loved the haria scene:D I can't wait for more:D but damnnn you're sneaky leaving us on a cliffhanger;) I don't even need to tell you to keep up the good work because you do every chapter:) this story deserves so much more recognition, because it truly is beautiful:) and you're a beautiful writer!!! X
OMG! I saw this picture on tumblr and it instantly reminded me of this scene.. Btw please dont think me as some sort of a pervert.... I love your story btw. Please update!
@Rihanna
Awwww :) thank you! I'm glad I could place a smile on your face, that alone makes me happy :)
Your chapters are wonderful, and I haven't stopped reading, nor I think I will ever. Great writers, and my opinions haven't changed. You aren't disappointing, in fact, only impressing. Seriously, this is the main reason for my excitement on updates. I mainly look forward to this fan fiction.
I'm glad your friend is feeling well again, and even though she's been ill, the chapters have been as great as before, and now after.
Congratulations on the well deserved views and votes, but get used to it, because you'll reseive more.
Have a good night, ladies <3 :)

A chat with moi? Yipppppie I can't wait! xOxO

oh geeze, as always, well done! I laughed and smiled and got a little hot ... Wanting to jump in the lake myself :). I really felt like I was living out that kiss.... So thanks a lot for the fluttering feels haha. Love y'all ... This is the best... But I am torn between Louis and Harry ( but you know who I really favor ;)
@Niallerx4everx

So do I! :3
@Fiona Williams

Whoa!! I love both the fanfics that you've mentioned!! You're way toooo sweet with your praises, munchkin!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooooooo freaking much for believing in us even though we don't deserve it!! :D Thank yoooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! And it's because of all our readers that we are here today!! :D Love you so much!! <3 :) x -N.K
@Nowshin Styles

Oh my God! Can I just say that that is the sweetest thing anyone has ever said to us???? :D Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!! Even though we know we are nowhere near as good as the book and stories you compared our story with, but it feels completely unbelievable!! :'D Thank you sooooooooooo much for praising us this much even though we don't deserve it! Harry Potter? One Tree Hill? Dark? After? ASDFGHJKXCVBNMWERTYJ! You must be crazy! We are not even 0.1% close to being as good as these are!! You're way too kind!! Seriously! I'm lost for words! <3 Just thank you!! Really!! Thank you for being this sweet!! We love you! :') -N.K
@Canadianeeh
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii lovely!! How are you? :D We've missed you and all your wonderful support!! :D Thank you sooooooooooooooo freaking much for the feedback!! :) You definitely know how to put a smile on our faces!! :D Love you to the moon and back!! <3 :D x -N.K
@Gabby Tomkins

Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much, sweety!!! :D And I'm guessing you're a larry shipper from this line, "Please put Louis and Harry together!" :D Aha!! I know it was a typo but I love it! :P I actually feel like putting Harry and Louis together now!! :( Fml! I love how you and Em are leaving feedbacks as to who you ship!! We love the response! :D <3

Also, I want to take up this opportunity to inform you that I'm a huge fan of your fic!!! :D And I'm extremely honored by your interest in my story when your story always stays on the popular list!!! :D Thank you so incredibly much for your love and support!!! :D And again, I love "At First Sight!" :D <3 x -N.K
@Niall's baby

Just did, sweety! :D <3 Hope you like it!
@EMCLARKE12

Heeelllllooooooooooooooooo, lovely!!!!! I love you much much much more!!! :D You're way too kind and sweet!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!! For all the support and love yo have given my way.:') You're truly amazing!!!! And I'm nowhere near a good writer as you portray me to be!! It's just that you have a beautiful heart and see the best out of people!!:) <3 Thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much for everything!!!! And I sincerely hope you enjoy the Haria scene in this chapter, although I couldn't properly portray it!! :D I love you!!!! Please keep leaving us feedbacks!! Cause we absolutely love your response!!!!! :D <3 x -N.K