Traces of Your Touch (An AU Fanfiction) - Comments, page 22

@Rihanna
Thanks babe!!!! I'm so in love with this story! I can't wait!!! I miss when you guys don't update but then I like fangirl when you do! And Harry best be getting his act together or Louis will take his girl and no body's got time for that

@Rihanna
Thanks babe!!!! I'm so in love with this story! I can't wait!!! I miss when you guys don't update but then I like fangirl when you do! And Harry best be getting his act together or Louis will take his girl and no body's got time for that

@Rihanna
No tips needed! Your story is amazing! :D

No!!! This is honestly one of the best stories I've read!! I was never good in reading and ever since I started looking at this website and reading amazing stories like yours I've become one of the best readers in my class!! You are such a inspiration to me and I know EXACTLY how you feel but trust me you'll get through it! We would never hate you! But please don't stop doing what you love because of other people he probably is jealous of you because of how amazing of a writer ou guys are!!! PLEASE DONT STOP!;( :) <33333

Pleeeaasee don't end it!! This is the story I look forward to reading every single day! I totally respect if you decide to end this story, but just know that soon (I think) you will be done in school and that's probably the only place where people will be this cruel to you. If writing is what you want to do in life, then you should do it! You will probably end up being waay more sucessful then them anyway! I never post any comments on fanfics, but I just needed and wanted you to hear this! Just stay strong and do what you love and then everything else will feel irrelevant. Focus on the Good things in life! Love from Norway. Xx

Noooo Amiga my heart is torn!!! Please message me any means by how I can keep in touch with you other than this site. People just don't understand what inspires our hearts as individuals and don't know the harm a simple word or action can cause :( Sending prayers and positive thoughts your way Hun xoxo

Noooo Amiga my heart is torn!!! Please message me any means by how I can keep in touch with you other than this site. People just don't understand what inspires our hearts as individuals and don't know the harm a simple word or action can cause :( Sending prayers and positive thoughts your way Hun xoxo

let me tell you one thing ! I thing your wonderful and that guy is a dick. I can't persuade you and I wont but you just have to know your an awesome writter and you'll do really good in your future , love :) x

@Rihanna
Your welcome ;)

@Rihanna
Thaaaaaaaaaank you!!! Like seriously you don't even know!<3 You are incredibly sweet!!:)
And this fanfiction is amazing, and mine is NOT better!!!:) But thank you!:)
And good to hear!!(:

@ChloewuvsHarry

Are you insane, love? We adore you and your fanfic!! :D Just cause we don't get a chance to leave a feed back doesn't mean we don't like it! And sweety, your fanfic is a hell lot better than ours! And we feel honored to have you as a friend, being so good and all! :D I was mentally doing a victory dance when I saw the review in Fanfiction 101! I was like, that's my friend right there! Ha! Felt so proud of you! :D Love you, muffin! Oh and I'm doing great! How about you? Feeling better? :) <3 x

@nafalovesonedirection

I know. :3 I'm falling for him badly! :( I'm so glad that you liked the Laria scene! But trust me, Harry is gonna turnout to be muuuchhhh better! :D Can't wait for you to read more! :D And thank you for your feedback! :D <3 x

@ashleyyyyy2468

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, sweetheart! :D Thank you sooooooooo much for your amazing feed back! :D You're really very sweet but trust us when we say that we're really nowhere as good as you think! :P We honestly don't put much effort over it! And know that we'd actually be okay writers if we tried! But thank you!!!! :D Hope we can keep your faith on us! :D Love you! <3 x

@Harryangel

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, beautiful! :D First of all, thank you so much for putting up the time to give us your opinion!:) And believe it or not, we were so glad that someone took the time to notice the fact that Louis was being given more importance in the story compared to Harry, even though it's a Harry fanfic!

Here's the thing, love! We have noticed how the third character in most triangles is always portrayed as someone who makes Harry jealous and nothing more. Meaning, that most authors don't put much effort with the third character. For instance, in most Harry fanfics, Zayn is put in as the guy who falls for the OC. And the authors bring Zayn in and out of the story like a puppet. They only portray Zayn's feelings for a little while, before putting him completely out of the picture once they're done! And to be very honest, I feel like Zayn's character is objectified completely. He's used as a puppet just to make Harry jealous. That is why, I'm trying my best to portray Louis' character so that there is a more realistic feel to it. So that people don't objectify him like most fanfics do with Zayn. Plus, there will be a plot twist soon and when it comes, I won't be able to show much of Louis. That is why I'm trying to portray Louis with a little more detail than Harry, who will be portrayed with more depth in the future! :) Hope that answers your question. :D And if not, please do ask again! We loved hearing your opinion! :D Thank you once again, lovely! We love you! :D <3 x

@Just a Crazy Mofo

Haha! Thank you, lovely! But trust me when I say that I haven't portrayed anything of Haria yet! Just 2% of Haria has been shown! :D So hopefully you'll love Harry more than Louis soon! :D Although I myself am becoming a Louis girl! ._. Thank you for your feed back! :D Let us know what else you think about it! :D <3 x

@Meowimafishy

Hhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii muffin! :D Where have you been? We missed you! :D How are you? And I know!!!! I myself am becoming a Louis girl! :$ I feel like I'm cheating on Harry though! :$ Oh and sweetheart, you're gonna love the idea of Haria soon! Don't worry! :3 It'll get better! I love you!! Leave us more feed backs cause we miss you when you're not around! :D And thank you for your love! Mwah! <3 x :D

@Thatband1d

Hiiiiii, sugar bun!! :D Can I just start off by saying that I felt extremely intimidated by the fact that you write "Dumb Fanfic Moments"! :P I was like, shit, I'm screwed! There goes my story and all those cliche plots! :P But you have been nothing but a sweetheart to us! Thank you sooooooooooooooo very much for your love! :D I love you and am so happy that you actually enjoyed it! :D Please do tell us when we become way to obvious though! We would love to know our flaws! :D Thank you once again, lovely! :D Love you! <3 x

@Tomlinson Is my love

Hi there sweetcake! :D Thank you sooooooooooo much for your support! I know I say this to everyone, but you're really way too sweet! I have made the chapters bigger than usual just for you! :D Hope you like it! Keep believing in us like this! Cause all of our readers' feed backs inspires us to write better! :D Love you! <3 :) x

@Forever_Yung

Hi there, beautiful! :D Thank you soooo much for your kind words! You're really very sweet! Thank you for having so much faith on us! We hope we don't disappoint you ever! :) And Babe, go check out the stories that we mention in our notes! They're really really good! :D As for Harry, here you go! Now you can't dislike him anymore in the story, cause he's our cupcake! :3 :D Thank you once again for all your support, sweetie! :D Please keep leaving us feed backs cause we love you! :D <3 x

@MorrocanQueen
Hiiiyyyyaaa, lovey!
Thank you sooo much for your kind words even though we don't deserve it! :D We love you and hope never to disappoint you! :D Please keep believing in us this way! :) <3 x