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Can you please review my story The Outsiders? You can be brutally honest, I need the criticism because it really helps me improve. Also if you have time can you review A Day In the Life of a Diva and Twinsies? Outsiders- 2 chapters. Diva- 30 chapters. Twinsies- 3 chapters I think.
Could you please review Live While We're Young? There's a lot of chapters, but their not very long. Thanks! ~Belle~
the one from the crowd
your still the one
is this true love, or have i gone mad
never in a million years
love finds a way
liams little sis
thank u, and i hope u can read 1 soon, u dont have to read thm all, just 1, but, ill leave tht up to u
your still the one
is this true love, or have i gone mad
never in a million years
love finds a way
liams little sis
thank u, and i hope u can read 1 soon, u dont have to read thm all, just 1, but, ill leave tht up to u
@Harrehlovemeh
Yeah! For your first fan fic, you're off to a good start. Better than most, actually :)
Yeah! For your first fan fic, you're off to a good start. Better than most, actually :)
@harryfanficlovehazza
I'd be happy to!
@Harrehlovemeh
Well if you're looking for an honest review you came to the right place! I'd love to :)
I'd be happy to!
@Harrehlovemeh
Well if you're looking for an honest review you came to the right place! I'd love to :)
Hey... Um I was wondering if you would read my story? Well, part of it I'm still not finished. I've asked people to review my story, but they say "oh, it's really good." Blah blah blah. I want someone who will actually critique my story. Um so it's the first fanfic I've written. EVER. So, yeah :3 and thank you if you do(:
can you please review and rate The mentally brave please?
Thank you =)
1/23/14