Fanfiction 101 - Comments, page 9

Could you review my story Socially Awkward? Please and thank you.

@NarryDyles
I only have 3 questions first: (a) Are you the actual writer of Dark? (b) Do I have to read Dark first? & (c) if I do happen to review it poorly, will I be cyber attacked by half the fandom for not liking one of the most famous fandom fanfics? The last one is just an if because I haven't read it yet and I'm a strongly opinionated person, but I do have some concern for myself…

Write a review on Knockout(Sequel to DARK) please?

Link

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/40923/Knockout/

Awww yayyy THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm so happy that you like it :) and I'm really excited to get it started as well! Thank you again :)

Will you please review my story? It's called I Do. I just started it and I have a feeling it's not good so I want to delete it... I'm not sure...

Will you please review my story? It's called I Do. I just started it and I have a feeling it's not good so I want to delete it... I'm not sure...

Can you review mine?

Thank you for reviewing mine, you can take it down now if you'd like.

Can you review Embers for me? Thanks.

@wonderful .
Well, you definitely deserved a 10. Alter is definitely one of the best stories I've read and one of my all time favorites. I mean, I would know; out of the 133 fanfictions, I've only ever given ten 10's so that has to say something. I can't wait to continue reading it :)

Oh, gosh. Thank you so much for your review. It's so hard to get a 10, and you should have honestly seen my face when I saw it lol. I'm glad I've grown from the past stories you've reviewed and I can't wait to move on :)

Can you please review She taught me How to love?

Can you please review my book Teenage Dirtbag?'it has nothing to do with zombies vampires or carrots or anything. If I say carrots in future chapters it may be a joke Louis makes up. But it would be in long time.

Can you review my story : "Dance For Me" It's a Harry Styles Fan-Fiction. Thanks so much. -Brianna (XxBriannaxX)

I know you get a lot of these but can you read my story " Change My Mind"?! It's my very first fanfic, and I'm trying to get all the opinions I can! It would really mean a lot to me!
Thanks love!!!

This whole 'argument' that happened a little while ago- That wasn't originally caused by my reaction to her review of my story was it? Sorry if this sounds narcissistic, but I'm honestly curious.

Could you please review my story Gone <3
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/39122/Gone/

Honestly, I don't care if you review Demented anymore. But if you would replace it with my new story, Alter, which is a lot shorter and would take up less time, I would appriciate it. Thanks x

@Missesonedirection94
This is what I was trying to say! I didn't mean to hurt anyone's feelings, and the writer and I messaged, talked about it and it's over I just want to get over it, everyone gets their way! She's going to do something to appease me and it's still totally honest. So I would like to let this go.


@dontjockmystyles
I don't want her to stop writing her reviews, yes it's awesome to have an honest review but it's not as awesome if it hurts your feelings. That's all I just asked her to be honest with another... Tone. That's all. so thank you everyone and I respect your loyal readers, I was just putting my opinion out there and she told me she appreciated I was an honest person. I'm being honest and so is she. We worked it out, and I would like to get over it now. So thank you and I'm sorry if you felt I was treating you as though you were a child.

Okay. So I've been reading these comments and here's my point to all of this. Why does she (the reviewer, sorry love I don't know your name) have to be so damn rude about it. I mean yeah I TOTALLY agree that honesty is the best policy, but would it kill her to be nicer about it?

Think about it this way! And I know you'll all choose the first choice but I know you will truly pick the second one. Would you rather someone go "hey dude. Your story sucks balls, it's vomit, it's awful...etc" or have someone go "your story honestly isn't that good, your dialogue isn't good, your realism sense is bad. But if you work on it, it'll be better" which would you rather? Me? The second choice because it's a nicer way of saying your story sucks without actually that. I think all chance_sky was doing was defending her friend. Now I appreciate all o your opinions, but her review honesty hurt one of my friends feeling, people actually will say "thanks for the review" in the comments but message me and Go "OMG! She was bitchy! And I got the worst review ever! I don't know what to do!" That's actually a message I got from an author that got story reviewed.

Again. All my point and all Chance_Sky's point was would it kill the reviewer to be nicer about it. Thanks for the concern and thanks for your respect with reading this comment, but everything is over with so let's put this to rest okay babes! Thanks.