Fanfiction 101 - Comments, page 5

Hello can you please review the story " My Boss " . So far it doesn't have any smut chapters . I suggest you too read the two last chapters because i explain a lot of things there but if you want to read any other chapter it's fine by me . Hope you like it :)

When you find the time off your busy schedule of reading, I would love just to have 4-6 minutes of your time to read my new fanfiction, Before. It's only one chapter but I am looking forward to your constructive criticism on how to make it better.
Happy reading, Nessy

@ThatRandomUnicorn
To be honest, my heart was literally pounding against my chest when I read the review. In return for your lovely advice, I'm definitely going to check out your story Love at First Type. I bet I could learn a thing or two from you lol. I hope my vote will make a difference in you accomplishing your goal.

Can you review
Wonder
Hide & Seek
Line by Line
Black & White

@kkgal14
You're absolutely welcome! That makes more sense. I usually just think of actions and thoughts as coinciding factors of a story. Thoughts lead to actions, and actions lead to second thoughts - if that even makes sense. I'm glad you had a good birthday :)

Thanks for the review. I wasn't sure if you would like it, but I'm glad that you do. I italicize most of my paragraphs to separate my character's thoughts from their actions, but I guess I may overdue that a little to much. Oh and thanks for the birthday wish :) I got 1D tickets so I'm really happy.

Can you please review my story Love In Denial. <3 please and thank yous <3

Link :
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/56826/Love-In-Denial

Can you please do a review on my story? I am writing it with a co author but she hasn't updated in a long while. The story is called Waitin' for You <3. Please check it out after your waiting list is clear. Thank you :)

Thank you so much for my review! :3 I read it and I was like: "Wait, wait, is there a different story named this?" xD I was surprised I got a ten; I was expecting a six or something like that, because I don't really write anything anymore xD

Can you review my story "Coffee Shop"? Xx

@ThatRandomUnicorn
Oh ok well can u review 'my summer love'

Thank you for the review! I was so shocked when it got a 10 x thank you so much for your time xxx

@Niallers Nandos
Hi! I would love to review one of your stories, but I have no idea which one it is that you want me to review… Just let me know which story if you're still interested :)

Can you add my name to the list. I would love a review for my story Picture Perfect :)

Can you please review my story? :)

Can u review mine, please?!?

Can you review my story and give me tips? I want to make the story better.

Do I Frighten You?

Hey there! It sure has been a while, hasn't it? :P
Well, I decided not to delete this account, but to start writing stories on it. I hope you can find the time to review my One-Shot "Cry For me, Please?". It would totally make my day!
By the way, If you find the name Lysander in there at all, It's because I originally made this for a different site.
Thank you!~^^

So you've given me a review before, and I'd to know your opinion on my new story Fate. I have a feeling I could use the help, so if you don't mind could you review it over at
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/52385/Fate/ ?
Thanks so much!

Can you please review my story 'The Bucket List' Thank you x