Fanfiction 101 - Comments, page 22

@ThatRebelGirl/@ThatRandonUnicorn I'll be here patiently waiting. lol!

Hey, can u please help me with my story? Its called Amour and a Louis fanfic

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22031/Amour-Louis-Tomlinson-Fanfiction/1/

P.S there will be a couple grammatical errors (I havent gotten around to editing as yet)
Thanx,
Suman x

@Ciao Niccie @audreydeville @Amber Night
Trust me, I'm guilty of a lot of the stuff on those lists as well. One or two is fine, but let's just say I've been more creative on my most recent story to make up for it.

@zaynisthebestest
Completely agreeable; I think it's okay to use maybe one or two ideas you like as long as you don't do too many or one of the major ideas for your plot.

I really want to thank you for giving such amazing advices through those overused shit chapters... To be honest, I did hit the bulls eye a few times like the girl being American, spilling coffee (but that was in an airport, so it is kinda different) and the dimples ( but I have dimples, so I thought to use them).

Yeah, that's it...
I managed to dodge most of them...
Soooooo happy... :)

And as for your true identity..
I guess I have already nailed it.. :)

Chapter 30, 31 and 46 (although I may be guilty by twisting some) YOU HAVE MADE MY FREAKING YEARRRR! Thank you. *applause* That is all.

Okay..... So the overused shit chapters made me laugh, but honestly, if each story doesn't have at least one of the things on there, it was probably written by someone from Narnia or somewhere because a story without any of those things, well I've never seen one, but I still love the ones I read with this stuff in it

Okay I'm back, and while this may seem like a monologue and you could totally burn me afterwards, I'm gonna say to hell with it! According to this list I have to admit I'm somewhat pleased with myself. I did come close to a few but didn't hit the bullseye. And I'm only bragging because I used freckles instead of dimples. I deserve a star for that right? Anyway, thanks for these amusing chapters. You are one hella funny chica.

Chapter 30 made me laugh, but your point is so valid. I was hoping praying wishing you wouldn't call my name out in that attendance sheet until sex . . . Guilty. But at least my leading lady is confident, around 5"6 ( that's not short right) and has a life... I will pause here because I haven't read the second list and I don't want to have to stick my foot in my mouth... Be right back

AND AS FOR THE RELIGION ONE (on your "Overused Shit 2" chapter):
Melody's mother is going to seminary, so suck it. :P
And just for that, I have a chapter coming up that I've been thinking about doing but not sure whether or not to actually use it, so now I will.
And now I'm probably going to use like, half of these a) because you hate it and b) because I was planning on it anyway.
Or maybe I won't. I'm trying NOT to be cliché here, so I'll take these lists into consideration.

@ThatRebelGirl

That might actually be an improvement over this piece of shit MacBook. It's like, four or five years old, and it sucks donkey.

Thanks girly

OH MY GOD GIRL YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER PLEASE READ MY STORY!!!!!!!

I wont back down

I FUCKING GUESSED AT THE LAST MINUTE!!!!

hahahaha in the overused chapter naming the daughter darcy like i cant stand that the stories get so hard to follow i cant read them i get confused easily lol

Can you read my story

I won't back down

Shit... That moment when you realize you use a lot of the Overused shit someone mentioned... I did the long lost sibling XD

When I read your chapter for overused shit, I laughed so fucking hard. But I used some too. :( but my character is average sized because I am :( All my friends are taller than me :( And I LOVE surprises unless it's in a horror movie (I'm always scared)

I didn't realize that you gave a review until now. Oops. I though you skipped me. Lol fail

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee I feel Like I know you and I agree with @ChloewuvsHarry
tell us!!!!!!