The Skype call that can change everything - Comments, page 6

I know that but if you read others they have more plot, substance, or whatever you want to call it

@Mrs Tia Payne
I am aware of that I just said it's highly unlikely

...anyway I love the story keep updating x

@Alexandrite
that's why it's called fanfiction (fiction) if it was meant to be realistic the it would be called non-fanfiction (non-fiction) these are made up story's

@ChloewuvsHarry

if you read the summary then you would have known she was trying to Skype her friend but accidently skyped louis.

Not trying to be mean but the entire thing is unrealistic i mean would another person really be let into one direction that quick and i mean its called a boyband for a reason and you also need to explain stuff like why he wanted to kill the whole family

Holy carp she is the luckiest person in the world!!! Wish it was ME!!!:)

@ChloewuvsHarry
Hi I know the story suck it well because it my first . Louis is bored of all they typical 13 girls out there screaming everywhere he goes. So when Kate popped up she was different and normal and did not scream. Kate even though she hates one direction she ends up liking what they do and who they are as people not as celebrities . I am sorry the chapters are short but I have loads of homework and coursework to do so when I get chance I will try to make the chapter long but right now it is hard for me to do all work and update at the same time. Sorry again for the short chapter . Thanks for commenting tho

The story is.. Interesting.
All I'm going to say is that the chapters are a bit short, and the whole thing is really unrealistic.
Like in the beginning, Louis said he wants to hang out with her.
Even though she is 13.
And he is 21 .
Like that's just off.
And it's also a bit hard to believe that Louis' number is THAT close to her friends, and Kate said she hates one direction with a passion, so why would she want to skype him?
Dont take this offensively, just trying to help (;

I love the story but i think she acts a little too old for her age and the boys they are like 20 and falling for a 13 year old why? but i really love the story and if you think im critisizing your story im not im promise im just a little confused.:/:)

Update

update quick!!!!!!! I want more x

aww thanks so much

@Louis girl
I love it

awwwwwwwww I hope you like the story so far

Cheryl and liam are so cute together I hope they never brake
up they should have kids and grow old together xx

Wait...Kate should be older....and if she stays 13 she shouldn't go out with Liam because he is 7 years older than her, and it doesn't seem right...but they would make a cute couple<3 what will people think?

I think Kate should go out with Liam not Nathan..... can't wait to see what's next

ok looking forward to it.

awwwww thanks I will update soon.