How Sweet The Taste - Comments, page 5

Oh my goodness!! What the heck is going on with those boys? lol First Zayn, then Liam? I can not imagine what Harry would do if he found this out!! Refresh my memory please, isn't Liam's power mind reading? So I wonder what he has in mind for her!! I love it!! :0

Wow shock updated ASAP :)

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loooovvveee iiiiitttt :::DDDDD

Please update soon!

@NightShade Hawkins
lol I'm glad my story is that interesting!!!! :D

@hazzahstyles19
Yes. I'm in love with this story, as you can obviously see because the minute you posted an update, I read it. That's dedication! Haha

- Hawkins Xx

@NightShade Hawkins
Like, I need to update more??

Three words: I. Need. More.

- Hawkins Xx

Omg update!!!!! I am lovin it!

@NightShade Hawkins
Thank you :)

@hazzahstyles19
I am currently all caught up and I have several matters I would like to point out.

1. Stop saying your chapters suck in the Notes. They don't. If they did, I would've told you by now {trust me, I would've}.

2. I'm going to be honest with you. When first reading this piece, I thought it was going to be the One Direction version of Twilight {cue eye rolls and groans}. But then in comes Bonny who just shakes this cookie all up in the jar, not to mention the boys bringing Anna to their house and all. I love your originality {no sarcasm intended}.

3. You made Liam sexual. Thank God. I've only read maybe two or three stories that involve Liam being provocative {and even in those pieces, he was just barely hitting the lowest sexual bar possible. Trust me}. I also enjoyed his whole vision scene with Anna before the dinner. Once again I say, it's very refreshing.

4. I like the whole Nanna {Niall + Anna, duh} thing going on here. But if Louis is going to jump back into the plot, I'd avoid a love square {as much as it pains me to say so because that balcony scene was so good}, because love squares are just too damn complicated, too tiring, and just too NO.

5. I like how you vividly explained Liam and Harry's individual gifts. Niall and Zayn still have yet to show what they can do {I'm not counting the whole packing scene with Niall because it gave an idea as to what his talents were, but it left a lot to the imagination, which is not always the best thing when it comes to describing supernatural powers, since there are so many groups/types with only very slight differences to set them apart}.

All in all, another great work of yours. You keep me clicking on the next chapter again and again, anxious to read what happens next. If I have any more comments, I will be sure to notify you.

- Hawkins Xx

@hazzahstyles19
Yaaaay! I wanna tell the world! (Sarcasm)

@Love_Life3
Shhhhhhh :D Don't tell! lol

@hazzahstyles19
I'm right, aren't I?!

@Love_Life3
:D

It's Louis. He's a werewolf. OOOH, you sneaky little devil, you!

@louislove123
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@Nichole_HARRY 4eves
It's okay, sweetheart, you didn't know :) No need to apologize!