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@NightShade Hawkins
I hope you have a great summer too!!! I'll try to update but I don't see it happening :(
Curse the day that your school removed your laptop! Curse it all! I am a bit saddened at this trajic news, for your story plot was just starting to get really good! I don't know if I can withstand the wait! But for you and your story, I will try to not go mad. I wish you a good summer and opportunities to update your fantastic story.
- Hawkins Xx
Ooh! I absolutely LOVE the unique bits of yours that you have placed so wonderfully in the storyline. Each piece of the story flows smoothly and evenly, creating the masterpiece you have built that much better (I apologize if that was written weirdly). I'm stoked (I never use "stoked" unless I truly am quite excited about something) for what happens next!!! Bravo, my dear! Bravo!
- Hawkins xX
Oh snap! I did not expect that!! So good What will Harry think?! He will go all ape shit on them if he has to
Wowza!! Whatta chapter!! I wonder what Harry will think about her new found thoughts of why have one when she can have them all? Is this some form of rebellion phase she is going through? maybe from the whole 'soul mate' thing? Anyways!! I hope she does end up with Harry, he has waited for her for so long, and now he is trying to help her through everything. Ok, I am gonna shut up now...love this!!! xxx
Woah. That was intense. I was SO not expecting that whole sha-bang to happen. Lord. You have surprised me; well done. No sarcasm intended. I'm curious to read what happens next.
- Hawkins Xx
@angieuhlmann
Liam can put images and his own thoughts into someone else's head. Like right before Anna's first supper, that was him picturing what it would be like for her if she were to hook up with him. He put that in her head.
Newest update: Yes. There was so much YES in that chapter. That's all I can really say; Yes. God, yes. I loved the cliffhanger at the end, the intricate details of Zayn's character you placed oh-so-well into the story line. Yes.
Ooh! I just had a revelation! What if you stemmed this story into 5 individual books, each one depicting Anna being with one of the boys. I, personally, would love that, seeing how just about everyone {including myself} loves the new incorporation of Zayn {and now Liam} back into the story. So one book could be her being with Zayn, another could be with her and Liam, and etc. And none of them stem back to her being Harry {even though her and Harry and a good couple and all}.
It's just a thought. It's your wonderful story and thus it's your choice to what ever you will to it. Keep up the lovely writing!
- Hawkins Xx
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It was good, I got a job. We don't start school until next Monday though… I might not be able to update as much as I used to last year because my job is going to be working me after school so that will be taking up most of my time but I promise to update when I can!
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