The Story Critic - Comments, page 5

@Jen Storm

your welcome! did you like it?

AHH! Thank you so much!!! :))

@Kayla Styles

I will. I just have ALOT of stuff to do. I have like, 5 things to update right now and im on break. I have about 40 minutes left till' I get back to class.sorry I didn't do yours sooner :)

Can you rate my story?

rate mine! I need more people to suscribe and vote and stuff like that! peas & carrots! (plz&thx) lol :) its called hippie and a hearthrob

could you check out my story what goes around comes back around please? :)

Hey could you please do my story? It's called Marcel.

@Unique_11

Message me really quick..

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@Jen Storm

I just did yours :D

@KEVIN!

okay I will! its one of my requests too lol

It wasn't texting it was a letter, kinda like the ones with cut out letters from magazine. And thank you :)

Heyy! Feel free to do mine, but I don't blame you if you don't, they are reallyyyyyy longggg. But seriously read 'Becoming Harry Styles' it's one of my favorite stories:)

Could you do mine? It's called, "Becoming Harry Styles."
Thanks for your time!

Please read " Let Go of Me" :)

please read his queen please

can you review Who Knew and being his best friend for me please?

@Directioner is my name

I just did yours.

Hey can you please review Bitch Please for me? I wanna see how I'm going on writing character direct-speaking... so yea :)