The Fighter (AU/Punk) - Comments, page 4

I prefer Harry and sage sorry :/

Liam may find her
I still say Harry and Violet/Sage
Her arm will get infected
Michael is a dirty bitch of a cop kinda like Sage buy worse

How much father does she have to walk. I feel like they will find her in the woods before she gets to safety. I think if would be really cute for Zage, you know since there both undercover and all and sorta cops and yeah. He seems really sweet in this story. I feel like Michael told them something and they didn't tell Zayn, but I wouldn't know what he would tell them.

Sage is going to get saved !
It still ship Liam and Sage together lol
I feel like Michael is a dirty cop person

This is really good :) I like you! Your a good writer

Update soon please? Suspense is killing me!

I DEMAND AN UPDATE THIS INSTANT...pwetty pwease? <3 *mwah*

Omg, she is getting close to escaping. Omg what if she flags down a car and it's like Liam or his friend. That would be bad, please don't have that happen. I wonder how Harry will react when he finds out she's a cop. These people are smart taking out the tracking chip thing. Update soon please :)

NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER NEW CHAPTER :)

ohemgee i love it! please update soon!!!!(:

I DEMAND AN UPDATE THIS INSTANT...pwetty pwease? <3 *mwah*

I DEMAND AN UPDATE THIS INSTANT...pwetty pwease? <3 *mwah*

@Emilayyyy
Lol ok, hope it goes well

@XxNaalaxX
Haha I've known him since June and we've been dating since December 15th but like I don't know how to bring it up.. He drives me to hospital check ups and stuff so I think I'm just going to be like "oh hey by the way I write fanfic about one direction and from this point on I'm going to be doing it around you" and jump out of the car so he doesn't have a chance to reply. and we'll just have to see how that goes ;)

A good time to tell your bf you write fanfiction? Well I guess it depends on how well he knows you and how long you have been going out. Plus if you think of it writing fanfiction is almost the exact same thing as just writing a story but using the same names and stuff as famous/other people. So... Ya. I hope that was helpful.. Maybe...

:)

Okay just checking, she is a personal friend of mine and she seemed upset.

@Emilayyyy

@Unless
We have talked and our stories are going in very different directions, I'm not stealing her story just because both of our characters are undercover. We have addressed the issue, no need to worry about it :)

This is just like Undercover, and she started her book first. Like this is the exact same. You are like taking her writing, changing just a few things, and then saying it's yours. You even commented on her book telling her to read it. So I think you two need to talk cause she's upset about this.

im going to be really sad if they kill Liam. If I was Liam I would do the same thing If I found out that there was a cop involved with my gang. But nobody would believe Liam if he said Sage was a cop.

Who is Collin? I think they should have had a tracker with her in case any of this happened. I want to know how hey found out!!!!