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I know you aren't really planning on doing a sequel, but if you do, I think them in college would be a good idea. Just sayin. (:
@Fuuuuuuuuucccckk
Yeah, me too but as in her POV and thoughts are too mature, with explanation for everything and stuff. I like it, but it seems too good for the POV of a teenager.
Yeah, me too but as in her POV and thoughts are too mature, with explanation for everything and stuff. I like it, but it seems too good for the POV of a teenager.
@Fuuuuuuuuucccckk
Yeah, me too but as in her POV and thoughts are too mature, with explanation for everything and stuff. I like it, but it seems too good for the POV of a teenager.
Yeah, me too but as in her POV and thoughts are too mature, with explanation for everything and stuff. I like it, but it seems too good for the POV of a teenager.
I love your writing style :) there are only few people who actually write with proper grammar, you're one of them :) this story is something so extraordinharry ;) :)
@Cinnabun
It's too professional??? That's ridiculous! I love that I can actually read it with correct grammar and sentences.
It's too professional??? That's ridiculous! I love that I can actually read it with correct grammar and sentences.
Make them get engaged or something! Also, decrease the quality of your writing, as in, as if it was a teen girl, because your writing is so professional! I just can't even-
This chapter was beyond adorable. I can't imagine how Niall felt when
Grace left. It saddens me to think about it.
Grace left. It saddens me to think about it.
Addie's very mature for her age :) haha
@Emeraldaurora
I'm still deciding if I'm going to or not. . . But that is a good idea if I do! It would be cool to see how their relationship grows over the years :)
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