Poison - Comments, page 3

This was good. Your character development is coming along very nice. I think Genny and Harry are probably the most developed right now. Make sure you know exactly how you want each character to be though, because, I did not expect Louis to act like that at dinner at all. Other than that, it is coming along great! I really wonder why Genny is letting Harry be all sexual with her though.

omg omg update. i love this. and i like her style[s](ahah wink wink you see what i did??). id do the same thing to louis.

I went and looked at your other stories and I found this! I love it, I don't want any of them to win because I want Louis.

I think Louis should pay more attention to genny and anyone but Harry should win...someone like Niall or Liam <3! Also I think her and Louis' relationship should go slightly better....
cant wait for the next update xxx

oh shhizzell <3 amazing

Oh wow. That was amazing. I love your plot twist. It is perfect. I can't wait to read the next chapter but don't rush it.

Oh shit

@Emilayyyy
Please update soon! This story is amazing! :)

wow this is great <3

Louis

❤️❤️ Update soon

Louis should take her v-card..then none of the boys could win the bet...buuutt...Louis could be secretly friends with them but Harry doesnt like him as much as the other boys because Louis stole his girlfriend in the past...hehe ;)

I think Louis so take Gennys virginity instead of one othe other boys that way the bet it over and non of them win

Update sooooon ;)

Hey if u want a cool character check out my story Why? Her name is Katterina she pretty awesome of I do say so myself

FALL FOR LOUIS

Ok

Jeees! this is sooooo perfect! <3 That pic of Louis made me shiver! soo hot! <3

@Lela Nance
No

Please update