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BAMBOO LOVES SLOTHS!! Wait, what?
Okay, here's some feedback:
Firstly, I like the way you space out your writing into separate lines - it makes it very easy to read and I don't get lost with who is saying what :P. I've read a couple of fanfics that have large blocks of text and it can get annoying and cause me to skim over parts. So good job with that :)
The plot is moving well, everything is believable (the characters and the events). I hope they get together soon! (actually, that's a lie, the longer you stretch it out the more there is for us to read :P. Well, whatever works for the story is best I suppose!)
Anywho, keep up the good work, I look forward to future updates! <3
SLOTHS LOVE BAMBOO :D
3/22/14