Challenges In Our Marriage - Comments, page 5

@ryliegray1209

If you read business proposal 'The Call' that your clue about James. I would really try my best to update more.

@lilannabeth

OMG!!!!!! who does that girl think she is!???!?! Okay let get this stirght i asuming she still thinks this was a "Business proposal". I mean does Mel really have to have a "boom i got a man barbecue" I think NOT!!! But Mel told her of without any words ;) Mel was like: (*hold the ring up*) He like it so he put a ring on it, okay! Can you say that! I think NOT! Hey if that was me I'd close the door right in DA face, so Mel i applaud you. You can't be having people like that in the story, but wait, i take that back cause who doesn't like a little drama! ;) I just hope... WAIT If that's Jacqueline than who is James? HA you thought i forgot about James. But I'll leave that to rest, I just hope harry doesn't leave because of Jacqueline. ARRRRRRR IT KILLING ME LIKE JACQUELINE IS GOING TO KILL THEIR MARRIAGE!!!!UPDATE I HAVE TO KNOW!!!!

@ryliegray1209

Please don't die yet and i had updated hope you enjoy. :) :)

@hazza_lover

Thanks Hazza_lover, i would love to hear more from you :)

I really don't know how to put this but UPDATE!!!!!! I DYING OVER HERE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and BTW Harry was sooooooo embarrassing, when he saw who brought her home HAHAHAHAHA I love how he waited so he could interrogate them because he knew Mel would not have it in her house to cute!!!!

I'm in love with your story! (:

@MissMexiStyles

Thank you :)

@ryliegray1209

Thanks to the both of you so much

Thank you so much I love how you can really see the father figure coming out of Harry. But I don't think Harry will be happy when he finds out that the same Levi that was giving his daughter googoo eyes is comforting her behind the cottage. This is a warning to Levi, be careful Harry may look like all bark but beware he will bite! LoL I love love love it. Keep writing!
P.S. Hey just wanted to let you know I will read anything if you wrote it my sister and I think you should turn your work into a movie

@ryliegray1209

Okay you know the part where it says Rate this Story with the stars, just press on the stars and that how you vote and rate a story.
This next update is for you, because you always wants an answer and I am happy that your more active about the story. thank you

@lilannabeth

ooh.................... *Dramatic pause* When you say "Levi and Aria" (*Air quotes*) does that mean that they are an "item" If so how old is Levi, and does Aria like him back? ooh....... I'm sorry but can somebody spell DRAMA!!!!! I fell so bad for Levi because if he hurts her *Dramatic pause* Harry will do... God knows what; I would say tear him limb from limb but sadly that sounds like an understatement I CAN NOT WAIT TO YOU UPDATE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I love this fan-fiction story this is like my baby, like i literally check this everyday to see if you update my sister and i (well mostly me) are obsessed with this! PLEASE KEEP GOING!!! You will always have me and my sister here to read it, okay!?!?!?! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) LOVE IT !!<3<3

P.S. I don't know how to rate either :( we made an account just to subscribe to this and comment on your work, teach me please.

Plzz UPDAAATTTEEE!!! I love this story so much!!!:):D

@ryliegray1209
I think that when you rate a story is the same as voting, I am not sure. Well I would update for you to understand Levi and Aria and Harry's reaction.
thanks for reading

Hey can someone teach me how to vote? Thanks. I love the update!!! But whats up with Levi staring at Aria? Does like her or something? I mean she only ten and if he does like her he needs to remember that her father is THE HARRY STYLES!!!! he was jealous in the other book (business proposal) because Mel was talking to a bar tender, A BAR TENDER!! If he does like her, he going to have to work his butt off to even some much as wink at her. And how old is this "Levi" dude and if wasn't staring at her because he liked why was he staring?

@ryliegray1209

thanks you and I hope you enjoy the next update. and I know during the story you would find out about James and Jacqueline and their roles in the story.

I love it!!! A wedding AHHHH!!!! I'm so happy right now Please update tomorrow. I love the time skip which allows you to do more with Aria because she is older. This chapter made my day!! And who knew Harry was so kind, loving, and thoughtful??!?! You really brought that side of him out it's go's to show you he was just hurt in the first one; You know what people say, hurt people, hurt people. Thanks sooooooooooooooo much for updating I LOVE IT!!!!

I love it<3

I love it<3

@lilannabeth

Thanks, please update today i have to know what happens please, please, please, thank you!

@hazza_lover



@Hkychk

Thanks guys I would update more