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What You Call Love - Comments, page 74

I love your stories, but can you please check your grammar before you update? You ideas are amazing, and I love it, but I almost want to unsubscribe because it gets too hard to read. For example, you always say "angle" but actually ts "angel" you are spelling it like the mathematical measurement. When it should be "to" you say "too". "Too" with the two o's means also or more. I don't think you mean it that way. You also never capitalize Ema! It's a name, and needs to be capitalized. I'm not trying to be rude, but it would be 10 times better if you fixed your grammar.
Miss M Miss M
9/29/13
Update update update update update update update update update update up
You should update and place these things in the authors notes because honestly it's really annoying to see there's an update and all it is, is a new story promotion. It almost makes me want to unsubscribe. I'm not trying to be rude but I'm sure others agree with me.
Awww I thought this is an update. Oh well
alovinliam alovinliam
9/29/13
omg..i got so excite and thnen it ended.gosh! its AMAZING <3 UPDATE PLEASE :)
irishdimples irishdimples
9/29/13
uR an AmaZAYN writer ExtodanHARRY, FabuLOUIS, PhenomeNIALL, BrilLIAM !!!!!!
Update Please this is so good i'm just like checking every 5 mins i you'e updated!! xx
Pava xx Pava xx
9/29/13
OMG!!! You're such a good writer, please please update!!!!
i love this please update
Carissaaa Carissaaa
9/29/13
OH MAII LAWD !!! I love it !!!!

you are an amazing writer!!!!
curls-lover curls-lover
9/29/13
That's what you fucking get, Harry. You take a girl from her OWN EMPHASIS ON OWN mother who's she lived with her whole damn life, she'll cry like a fucking water work.
Risingblue14 Risingblue14
9/29/13
OMG I bet I'm totally gonna love this story, just like the other one !
OMG update! I love your story!!
I love it!!! Pleasse update pleeeeeease
Aamna Malik13 Aamna Malik13
9/29/13
I LOVE YHIS AGHH! This is a great story!
Ahhhhhhhhhh update update update update update update update update update update update update you
Ahhhh so good! :)
lalaladooo lalaladooo
9/29/13
Bring in Terrell!!!!
Haha that's wat you get you little fucker.
Im seriously fucking pissed rite now how could he take little Ema!!?!?!?
Im mad at the character not actual Hazza bcuz seriously
how could u stay mad at that perfect specimen of perfectional sexiness??
Anyway my family is playing the wanted to get on my nerves it's seriously fucking working. Sorry bout my rant. As u can see there are two things I'm pissed about BYEZZZ
MimiMalik MimiMalik
9/29/13
ugh cliffhanger !!): lol jk but thx for updating!!!!(: -linsey
love_narry love_narry
9/29/13