A LITTLE CINDERELLA STORY - Comments, page 3

@simply me
Oh my gosh please do more I can't wait any longer! Just like one or two chapters pleaese!:) xxx

I know you are probobly working on your post but I couldn't sleep last night luv I'm dying here

Lol.yeah and thanx.I'm trying to figure out a good way to end it.I have something really good but that would extra chapters but I'll figure it out it.lol

This was a good one and I would do the same lol

@simply me
kayy ill wait for the rest:) x

@JessicaStyles

awwww thanx a lot.the new update is short and sort of boring but thats all my tierd mindcan do.lol

@simply me
lol because i LOVE THIS FANFIC SOO MUCHH! ITS SOO GOOD AND INTERESTING AND I DONT KNOW ITS THE BOMB.COM:) x

@JessicaStyles

lol.why?

@simply me
hahahaha i just died a little! :) x

@JessicaStyles

thanx. :)

@simply me
Alrighty then.. Oh and don't worry about the grammar part it's fine:) xxx

@JessicaStyles
lol.oh haha.let me think a bit and then il start.

@simply me
Hahaha I don't really understand the time that you always tell me that's alright lol and I'm so ready for the next chapter! Eeeeeeeeepppppp:D xxx

This story could have some great potential if you got a beta and corrected the mistakes everywhere. I'm sorry, but the mistakes make it impossible for me to read. I hope this doesn't offend you, I just want to help you be a better writer.

hahah yep.we almost rule the word and sure.il start now. :D

Oh my fudge!update again! I love how there is directioners ALL over the WORLD!!!! Update soon!!!

@JessicaStyles

done!next one tomorrow.its 00:51 and i havnt even fed my dogs.lol.

@simply me
Hahaha and alright I will be waiting for it impatiently lol.... And alright let me know when it'll be up so I can check it out:) xxx

@JessicaStyles

haha. updated.its kind of short but il continue in a bit.nah....i live in africa and no we dont ride elephants.lol.and thanx for always reading and giving me positive feedback. :D btw i thought of the bestest story ever as in wow!il do it after this one.its way way different from the usual.

@simply me
Oh ok them I read it wrong are you from England or something? And we'll I'm ready I check this thing like about a thousand times a day lol