The Deal (Harry Styles) - Comments, page 16

please updatee! im dying heree!:) xo

I noticed you like to use the word 'coldly' a lot lol
looking forward to the next chapter!

Ahhh this is honestly the best fan fiction ever!!!! I finished all of it in like 2 hours, that has to be a record!!!!

Woah this is great

@dreaming_of_harry
Omggg I found you

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@Lifesstyles
I'm dying right now. Today at brandy melville in santa monica I was showing two of my friends the fanfiction on their phones and I looked at the comments for a second and saw that you replied! I screamed and I was so excited and I got kicked out of brandy melville for causing a rocus but idgaf ... your amazing update now or ASAP because IM HONESTLY DYING

Please update i love it soooo much

liam said it and he would want to be a birthday cake because it would be a year before anyone ate him .

Update ASAYC

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i just want to say your comment made my day .. or night bc its 2am and i am reading ur comment. and thank you for being sweet amd the nice comment, your are really amazing. as for the competition.. results come in the next chapter which i am writing now and once again.. thank you xx♥♥

Hi im nicole! this is the best fan fiction i have ever read!! I started last night at 12am and I finished at 4am. Please update it will mean the world to mee <3 This story has given me so many feels its unbelievable. Harry. Liam. Like I start crying during Karry moments and the last Kiam moments have been really great too.... Please like keep updating you are an amazing writer i thought u were like 20 because of the flow of the story cause Im a writer too but your my age!! Your so talented like honestly I would consider becoming a writer when you get older your ideas are so vivid and captivating! Or like a screenwriter...

But anyways I know im to late with this competition but whatever Im gonna do it anyways the video diary was on the 7th week and....
Niall doesn't want to be a food because he doesnt want to get eaten but Harry suggested being a sprout because they never get eaten *LARRY MOMENT BTW*
Zayn wants to be a a rogan josh which is a lamb dish of persian orgin. He loves the taste of rogan joshes and he jokes that rogan and josh are his middle names
Liam being smart says he wants to be a birthday cake because it will be a year till he gets eaten
Louis would just be a ruler. No need to explain.
And I think harry would probably want to be a sprout because they dont get eaten like he said earlier

Anyways please comment back to let me know that you read this because it will mean a lott <3

pleasee updatee its sooo good! <3 xo

Liam said it :* plzz update

omg the only gif i really looked at was the last one when Niall fell on Harry! MEGA LOLZ! <3 what about Harry?i think shes just leading Liam on :( aww :(

I just read this whole thing in 2 hours and it is now 2 in the morning, that is how good this is!!! And nooooo she can't get with Liam!!!! Harry is like perfect for her why can be see that!!?? Aggrrhh my feels right now

Liam. His exact words were " if I was a food I'd be a birthday cake"...

Liamm wanted to be the birthday cake.
Why: Because at least they'd wait a year before they ate him.

Yes yes! It was Liam and harry said it would make everyone "so happy"!

Liam would be a birthday cake because he knows he has a year before he gets eaten

To answer your question I dont really remember who but they said that they want to be a birthday cake because people are usually happy when they are eating a birthday cakes...or somewhere along those line and I swear it was either Niall or Louis? Getting sp frustrated not remembering who!!!