The Bad Boy I Didn't Expect *On Hold* - Comments, page 2

Oh and welcome back babe! Hope you're feeling MUCH better!

:)

i love this story as always! :) I was kind of nervous for Zayn. I thought Zayn was going to do something stupid to make Aubrey want to break up with him for some reason. During the whole chapter, I was anxious until I found out what he was doing for her, I was relieved but still nervous, but I don't know why. then the last sentence reassured me. I Love this chapter. OMG i have got to stop rambling! Ok I'm gonna stop talking (typing) now. Bye :)

Update soon!!!

This chapter was great! I really hope Zayn remembers their little moment in the bathroom ;)

but welcome back love :)x

I HATE THE FIGHT THEY JUST HAD :( OMG I WANT TO CRY NOW. OMG I REALLY DO HATE THE FIGHT!!! :'(

Ah! Welcome back! Haha. Wow intense chapter, but excellent as always. I'm already looking forward to your next update!

Ah! Welcome back! Haha. Wow intense chapter, but excellent as always. I'm already looking forward to your next update!

Omg welcome back!!! Loved the update!! :)

@LIZZY THAT GIRL
Damon I can't. Just click on my username and look for Will I Ever See You A

The link to my story. Hope you like it :)

I was in a great mood until that birch Brittany came in the picture. I love that chapter! How the he'll does Zayn still love Brittany?! Aubrey is wayyy better!

OMG! GREAT CHAPTER. I FELT THE MOOD AND THE TONE! First it was all normal then I felt really worried that she was gonna dump him after finding the weed. Then I felt relieved when she didn't dump him. This it got exciting then quickly turned sexy for a moment. Then when she started smoking I got anxious that she was going to get addicted. Then it turned into a sexy scene (btw it was amazing) then when she finally asked Zayn and his sister's to move it with her and he accepted I was beyond happy! I just love this story so much! I get the FEELS every time I read another one of your chapters!

Aww!! Yay they're moving in together!! I love this story so much! I can't wait for the next update! Love ya

@niall girl
Thank you gorgeous :)

Your story is soooooo good. Please update soon!!!! I want to know what happens next!??


Keep up the great work! :)

@tigerlilyturner146
will do :)

Such a good story! please update soon!! LOVE IT xxx

@lousflowercrown
You're welcome. I was just speaking what I was feeling. And there are not weird parts in there because its natural and it makes the story seem real. That's was I and probably many other look for in a story. You did an amazing job writing this story and I look forward to reading more of your updates!:)