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Perfect To Me - Comments, page 5
I've read like a lot of fanfictions and it just something about this one and the love Abby and harry share is just like I don't even know!!! This story is like amazing no words can even fit the description!!!!! Please update please!!!!!!
I'm in love with your story!! :) keep writing! Check out mine if you're interested..! http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/8735/Youre-my-one-and-only/
I'm in love with your story!! :) keep writing! Check out mine if you're interested..! http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/8735/Youre-my-one-and-only/
Hey, check ot my story, Living In Darkness.
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/9026/Living-In-Darkness/
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http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/9026/Living-In-Darkness/
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thank you for this comment!! This is what I've been looking for in comments. And I agree with you, I really hate it when I go to read a fanfic and their grammar is TERRIBLE. It takes away from the story. I'm all about surprises, so I love plot twists. And I don't really like 'dark Harry' people who are writing some fanfics make him seem like some cocky, asshole. And I'm awkward when it comes to sex scences because well virgin Mary too! Haha.
thank you for this comment!! This is what I've been looking for in comments. And I agree with you, I really hate it when I go to read a fanfic and their grammar is TERRIBLE. It takes away from the story. I'm all about surprises, so I love plot twists. And I don't really like 'dark Harry' people who are writing some fanfics make him seem like some cocky, asshole. And I'm awkward when it comes to sex scences because well virgin Mary too! Haha.
Well congratulations, you successfully kept me up until 5 with only 2 hours of sleep before church! (Shhhh!) I read most of this in one night then finished it this afternoon when I got home and was texting my friend play-by-plays throughout the night.
Where do I start? Ah, here's a good spot: it seems like you actually payed attention in English class! Absolutely refreshing to find a fic that is grammatically correct as well as structured into proper sentences! Also you have multiple interesting plots. I cannot stress to you enough how awesome it is that I can't guess exactly what's going to happen (kidnapped/babysitter/new artist/not dark harry)! Speaking of dark Harry, its good to not really see him here. I rather enjoy your cute, clingy, clumsy version! Also I want to thank you for not going into all the sexual things fanfics usually sink to (virgin Mary here appreciates that)!
Now, pleaser let them fall back together because I can't take all these little stolen glances and subtle touches.
Great job! xx
This is amazing! There are so many question running throught my mind like are they going to get back together? What is Abby going to say? Will she say that she still has feelings for Harry? Will he break up with Taylor? I love this story so much! My favourite fanfic! I know you hate this but you really have to update!!!!!
my first time writing fanfic help me http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/9937/my-saver/1/
I have been reading plenty of fan fictions all summer and this is defiantly one of my favorites! (: you are an amazing writer. I can't wait till you publish the next chapter ;)
7/2/13