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I hope Harry ends with Audrey(: because Niall and Candi are just so damn cute together! I love this Story your an amaZAYN writer:) haha

Niall_is_my_Cutie
12/31/13

UPDATE I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH! Ur a gr8 writer:)

HOLY DIMPLE
12/30/13

I do get it! :O Haha. I just called you, and ur sister said ur not there......

HOLY DIMPLE
12/23/13

OMG, he still loves Candi!! But he loves Audrey too!! Omg, I bet Zayn is gonna take one of them ooo drama:) haha but really it's great and I can't wait for the next update!!!;) <3

Ayyeeeitsemmmmaaaaa
12/23/13

@HOLY DIMPLE
You have to wait and see (;

sluttystyles
12/22/13

I'm confused. In the last chapter, Harry said he loved Audrey, and now he's saying he's in love with Candi. EVERYBODY JUST LOVES CANDI! I love your story:) Update!:D

HOLY DIMPLE
12/22/13

Omg I <3 this sooooooooooooo much!!!

MyraHoran
12/22/13

@Niall_Loves_Me

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! I ment to make u laugh I just love this story

Yolo directioner
12/20/13

@Yolo directioner
You made me laugh xD Haha. Im gonna update after school tomorrow bcuz I have to babysit so I might do 2 updates for such long waits (:

sluttystyles
12/18/13

update right fucking now

Yolo directioner
12/18/13

Bro, dude, amigo, friend, companion, peer, sistaaaa, THIS BOOK IS ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY AMAZYN PLEASE KEEP UPDATING:)

Hazzabear69
12/15/13

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Tattoo Art
12/15/13

OMG PLEASE NO DONT DELETE IT I LOVE IT PLEASEEEE KEEP UPDATING IT I'LL WAIT AS LONG AS IT WILL TAKE EACH TIME JUST PLEEEEASE DONT DELETE IT!!! ITS TOO VERY AMAZINGLY FANTASTICALLY AWESOME TO QUIT ON!!!! PLEASE KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY! LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Ayyeeeitsemmmmaaaaa
12/8/13

in love with this plz update with a long chappe

Yolo directioner
12/7/13

@Niall_Loves_Me
No I was just wondering

Feliciamendez1
12/5/13

@Feliciamendez1
You didn't think I forgot, did you? (;

sluttystyles
12/5/13

@HOLY DIMPLE
I bet you did (;

sluttystyles
12/5/13

I thought Audrey was pregnet w/Harry's baby? I mean reading back they had sex w/o protection and she said it was possible.

Feliciamendez1
12/5/13

I enjoyed this chapter....

HOLY DIMPLE
12/5/13

you don't even need to fix the chapters.. I am going to be perfectly honest here. I thought that this was fine and I don't think you need to fix the chapters and even if you do, I am probably not going to go back and read them because I thought it was fine and then I will just be confused. Defintley keep the book though.