Perfect Act - Comments, page 8

I sure as heck Harry actually picks up one Bella's unhealthyness soon, cause of not I'm gonna start screaming. And this story and gotten rather popular, hasn't it?
But what I think is gonna happen next is that Bella will be going through Harry's clothes (or maybe taking them off), and she'll find the note and be like "what the fuck is this Harry?" And Harry will just be like "uhhhhhhh... A ladie at the airport gave it too me" and she'll be all "how could you never hav told me about this?" And then she'll go all bat shit crazy in him and he'll be like "we'll whose Riley?" And she'll be like"Riley is my ex counselor" or something like that.

@XOXOH
Yeah I spent a long time deciding if Bellas dad would be all sober and cleaned up when she saw him but I ended up keeping him like this...I really don't like Bellas dad....he's a dickhead.

I'll try to get up another update within 24 hours but depending on homework it might be another day. Thx for commenting btw and I loved ur chap of ITP I can't remember if I commented or not but yeah I loved it

I don't think I have any words for how much I hate Bella's dad??? I don't think one exists in the dictionary. He better not do anything to mess with Bella and Harry! She seriously has enough going on. I feel so bad for Bella :(

@Just_a_teenage_dirtbag
Hehe xoxo

Pooooey.

Your mean. :P

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@Lazylazerpants
hehe I feel like I have so much power, knowing all of Bellas secrets and everything that's going to happen.

@fascinated
hmmm I'm still actually deciding who Riley will be and what he will be like....I think I know but I might change my mind ;) it's happened to me before that I never get updates. Although most of the time it's coz I accidentally unsubscribed.....whoops. Its Friday so depending on the homework I get I hope to do some writing tonight and have a chapter up sometime over the weekend.

GAH more secrets... Oh boy

OH MY GOD!!

i think that bella and harry are going to have a terrible row when he confronts her and all of the secrets about her cutting will come out and it will all be horribly brilliant


is that mean?

Ok , the notifications for this story for me officially don't work :'( I'm devastated. But I shall find a way past it all!!! And I betcha Harry's gonna confront Bella about Riley, cause he's gonna think that Riley's in love with her or something (will he be...), and then they'll have a fight about Harry bein overprotective and Bella never telling him anything. Or, Riley will be her cousin or one of Eliza's cousins or something. Or secret half brother. Or high school friend. Or maybe even counselor (though I doubt hella would ever go to counseling). And because Bella's dress is a one shoulder one, and her bikini is strapless, would they be able to see the scar on her shoulder where she cut herself???

@fascinated
I looooooove reading what you think will happen. It always seems to inspires other stuff for the story. I will try to update tonight, if I don't have that much homework and I finish practicing clarinet then I will update. So I think you should be getting an update tonight.

Again @zaynisthebestest, I am soooooooooooooooooooo sorry about that!!! Hopefully it'll come up, but do you know more or less when you'll be posting (tomorrow, Friday, weekend?). And I think that Bella will start having a panic attack or something, and Harry will ask what's wrong and she'll do the Bella and go oh no nothing it's fine but then Bella's dad will spot her and go up like a drunk man and start yelling or something and Harry will be like what's going on here mate and Bella's dad will be like hasn't BELLA told you about her own father? And it'll be super dramatic and then the press will find out and Simon will be like no guys this has to stop and say like maybe it would be better if you guys stopped going out together in front if the press and Harry and Bella will say NO and then the boys will defend the. And evenatually Simon will give in but say that they have to be extra careful!!!

@fascinated
Yay I've missed your comments!!! For a while there I thought maybe you had unsubscribed. What do ya think will happen with Bellas dad? I'll update as soon as I can, I'm making a pretty long next chapter but I already have like half done, depending on how much homework I get I think I should have it up within the next 48 hours

OH MY LORD FIRST OFF I AM SO SORRY I HAVEN'T COMMENTED IN SO LONG THIS DIDN'T COME UP IN MU NOTIFICATIONS BUT I SAW IT ON THE POPULAR PAGE (congrats about that by the way)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have missed put on so much, it's terrible. Super duper sorry, and I was NOT purposely neglecting it. I'm enjoying Bella's flashbacks and finding out more about her past... You understand the character a lot more. And God I just wanted to slap her when she started vomiting again. I got shivers! And I don't understand the feelings that cutting gives you other then pain. So she definitely should not have done that. And Harry and Bella need to learn more self control around each other. I mean, what if someone has to bend down under the table to pick something up??? They would not have been happy or secretive with what they saw. And then Bella's dad shows up. Poor Bella. I feel sorry for her. Pease update soon ;)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MORE SOON!!!

its fantastic and you left us all on a cliffhanger

Bella and Harry are little freaks lol. Oh god Bella's dad......

I loved the chapter! Your story is amazing! Keep up the great work!<3 update soon?

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thanks you guys xoxoxox

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yeah Harry or someone needs to find out soon.....writing about her is making me sad??? hmmm I wonder how many more chapters I should make it before someone finds out.

OMG Bella :( I hope someone finds out, mainly Harry, but if not him then someone! :(((

@zaynisthebestest

thank you so much for the suport. it means alot to me. i will message you soon if i find the time. keep up the amazing work on your story:)

Harry needs to find out about Bella's self harm and help her like the perf little bf he is:)