Perfect Act - Comments, page 17

Poo you. I honest thought that the actual video came out. And I stayed up waiting for my iPod to charge. :P

Ok, I wasn't actually planning on watching story of my life video, but now I think I will :)

WTF is happening to her legs!?!?!? WTF!!!! UPDATE

@laurenlovesyou
Haha thanks :)

GOOD GOLLY MISS MOLLY THIS IS GREAT

GOD BELLA ARE YOU OKAY SOMEONE GO GET BELLA CAUSE SOMETHING HAPPENED AND I CAN'T GET HER CAUSE SHE DOESN'T EXIST BUT I LOVE HER ANYWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just let her be okay woman!!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!! ;)

o my goodness i LOVE this story its amazing! please update soon!!

Please update!!!!

I thought it would be her mother but still AWESOME!!! Can't wait for the update! xxx

I KNEW THAT SOMEONE RELATED TO BELLA WOULD CIME IN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! And now were gonna find out more about Bella's past, which I have also been betting on!!! Yayyyyyyyyyy!!! And I still think that Lucy's gonna tell Bella and Eliza that they're related, or Eliza's related to ky or some'in!!! You HAVE to update again soon!!! And I REALLY hated Niall in this chapter!!!!!! Xxx

Yeah. My friend didn't sleep at allay night @zaynisthebestest!!! And we're like, oh it'll be okay, it's a kids park, and then at the end were all like, oh fuck, not gonna sleep tonight!!! And I don't think school was invented to kill us, just to make learning as boring as possible! AMD I hate and love oblivious teachers. On one hand I'm like, woohoo, they don't know what I'm doing, but on the other hand I'm like, god your such a bad teacher, I'm coming whatever I want and you don't even notice!!!

@fascinated
Awwww crap school. I swear it was invented to slowly and painfully kill us. Ill probably continue writing during class tomorrow, depends on which subjects i have. Some of my teachers are so oblivious when I'm writiing. Anyways, glad you had a good time at lunar park. When I went on the haunted house I almost broke my friends hand I was squeezing it so hard!

I had soooooooooooo much fun @zaynisthebestest!!! I went on the Ranger, which was amazing!!!!! But friends managed to convince me to go into the haunted house with them, and I spent the ENTIRE time swearing!!! I almost peed myself it was so scary!!!! And update again soon, even though there's school tomorrow :( I have homework I haven't done, so I'm doing it in pc :/

UPDATE!!!!!!! This is AWESOME!!!!! Kepp writing and thanks for the update.

Have fun at lunar park @fascinated ! And yay no-one suspected it, that's was I was hoping

@realniallgirl @laurenlovesyou thanks for ur comments xoxoxoxox I have do do about 2 hours work of homework today, but then I'll write as much as I can of the next chapter and update ASAP

I love this sooo much! I cant believe NIALL KNOWS LOL

Ohhhhh myyyyyy gooosssshhhhh Niall knows now!!!! Ugh this is perffff! Don't stop writing!

NOT expecting that!!! Though I guess you would want me to predict everything... But I think Nialls gonna keep it quiet until he gets really pissed about something at one of them and will blab and they'll get really mad at him!!! Update in the morn! AND IM GONNA LUNA PARK TOMORROW AND I HAVEN'T BEEN IN LIKE ALMOST 3YEARS!!!!!!!! I'm suuuuuuuuper excited!!! :)

@Just call me Kat
Thank you so much :)

Omg luv the story so much!!!!! I think its my favorite fanfic so far! Cant wait for the update!!! xxx