Perfect Act - Comments, page 21

lie it!

@fascinated
Ill update soon so you can read it before you leave. And with the month in the story I know its either April may june or July. I'm trying to figure out what chapter I put it in. And may I say I massively appreciate how you leave long comments I love reading them. Xoxo

I've been trying to find the month but I haven't found it yet! But did you set the first chapter to the time that you started writing (eg. If I started writing now, it would be set in September)??? Because if so, you can find out by going into edit story, chapters, and it should say underneath it when that chapter was published, so you figure out what month it was first set in by that! But if it wasn't set when you started writing it, I could read through to try to find it, but I'm supposed to be packing :P. And I think Eliza shall show up, do her nutter at the boys, storm of and cry into Luke's shoulder whilst he glares at them, and then we will find out if Eliza is actually something more, or whether I'm just being weird!!! And also, Bella will either wake up and be SUPER sick, and have to stay in the hospital for ages, or she will have to be moved to a different hospital I a different state, because they need better equipment, and then the boys will fly themselves, Eliza, Luke and Jamie over, and Eliza will apologize for being such a bitch, and tell them everything they know about Bella's past. Or she will go into a coma. Oh, and please update before night time, cause I'm going to somewhere with no Internet for like, 5days, and I REALLY want to know what happens before I leave!!! :)

OMGGGGGG

UPDATE!!!

@realniallgirl
Thanks, your awesome to <3

@fascinated
youll see what's going on in the next chapter. I'm not sure when it will be posted though as I am going away for a few days and I'm not sure if ill be able to get wifi

Wow I think its just a horrible bug like you suggested since that happened to me before. Throwing up all day. Not pretty. Anyway keep writing the same way you are now. My ratings drop all the time! Your awesome! ILY

What can I say @zaynisthebestest? Your a very good writer!!! And with Bella's sickness, i would say she's pregnant, but I'm fairly certain she can't be, so she's probably got a bad bag, which I think she's gonna have to go to hospital for!!!

@fascinated
Then I'm very touched that you stayed up to read the chapter <3 and yes it would be a little worrying if I didnt know all of her secrets ;)

No, the whole Eliza thing seems to likely to let to of @zaynisthebestest!!! And I'd be kind of worried if you didn't know all of Bella's secrets, seeing as she came from your imagination!!! And I will stay up JUST for the next chapter! That is VERY rare young lady!!!!!! ;)

@fascinated
Haha you really aren't ever going to let the Eliza thing go are you? Eh well, eventually you'll all find out everything there is to know about Bella. Only I know all her secrets mwa ha ha.

Hehe next chapter will be un in under 10 mins.

I think that (as I said before) that the others are gonna find out through the media!!! And that Eliza is more to Bella's past then just a friend (I'm never giving up on that idea)!!! And I'm pretty sure were in the same time zone, so pleas update again tonight!!!!!!! :)

THIS CHAP WAS AWESOME SAUCE :)
UPDATEEEEEE <3

OMG I love this! Keep going!

@laurengrace5252
Glad your liking it :) next update will be tomorrow

DUDE! This is the best fanfic EVER! It's seriously the best one ive ever read! Keep going!

@fascinated
No problem :)

It's all my pleasure @zaynisthebestest!!! And I live giving you ideas, and one a agin thanks to giving me a shout out (whatever it is)!!! :)

@realniallgirl
I've been waiting for this moment to! I'm surprised it took almost 20 chapters though, I didn't think I'd be able to drag it out for so long! For next update info read the comment below this one

@fascinated
Haha yes it would be much easier if they could read there minds! I'm not going to say anything about your suggestions as I'm not sure which one i will use if I use one and don't want to give anything away. But know that I definitely am considering them, I've actually thought about some of them previously but forgot once I got new ideas. Thanks for taking the time to write down your ideas I appreciate it lots :) next update will be coming most likely on Sunday afternoon, I will try to get one up earlier but its unlikely because I have big plans for the weekend. Sorry to say but the next chapter isn't as long (I don't think) as is definitely a filler, but I needed something to put in between this chapter and the one in two chapters time, so yer sorry bout that but oh well. Once again, thanks for the support and ideas :) xoxoxo