Unbelievable - Comments, page 3

@Leximore
hahahaha *evil* :P :P and stop revealing things OR ELSE I WONT PUT IT IN THE CHAPTER!!! buhahahaha :P

I TOLD U I'M STILL A KID!!!!!!! (13 is a teen already) BUT I'M STILL A KID and when are you gonna the next one .......oh yeahm AWESOME STORY ABOUT MY MUM DYING (Grace isn't even my mum's name its Love not Grace) but when is the me and my bf ruining something ;) (u know wat mean) OH GOD I JUST TOLD A PART oF DA NEXt ONE odeyewbsjitfdxbioesashdk

@Leximore
lol updated babe.

@maliksbabe

u promised and u should keep that promise tonight no more ok keep it I'll die if u don't LITERALLY

@Leximore
im at a party :P will update before the night is out here. I PROMISE. this time really!!!

:( no chapter? (Read it in a BABY'S VOICE)

@maliksbabe

KK

@Leximore
okay ill email it to you love. :)

@maliksbabe /mum

okay. maybe after school tomorrow k,mum? I'll ust send it to u twitter kk? MUAH MUAH MUM LOVE YAH send me your number so we can talk voice too?

@One_Direction_Forever
i will later today. :)

Update please!!

@Leximore
okay iv been meaning to tell u, send me the pictures of u and josh that u want up. then ill put the characters up, and yah we will be talking about u in the next chapter. :) say hi to josh from me too! :D okay ill update soon.

@maliksbabe / mum

uuum... are u and Zayn gonna be talking about me in the next chapter right? because am really expecting that please upload already do u want me to die because of u not uploading 'cause m home alone and I'm at the kitchen cutting some carrots PLeASE UPDATE 2 or 1 please just one question am da young sster if am and m 13 there should have JJOSH there too ( sorry but he begged me to tell you he gave me the cheekyness) and why don't see my face in one of the characters Josh said he wanted to be in it too he doesn't hve any account on aything(stupid right?) oh ya,and he's with me now he just got down from the bedroom he said "HI TO ALL OF U FANFICTION WRITERS! ad especially u @maliksbabe /mum of Lexi" ( quite cathed up) MUAH UPDATE,K?

@Directions_lucky_flower
hehehe lets see ill update tonight i guess. :P

@Leximore
yah one more. :P but maybe ill take pity on you and upload? dunno yet. lol



@slushibubbles

thanx so much maybe give a shout out in ur story? ;)

@maliksbabe /mum

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I really like this story. And is that your room? its so neat and organised. But back to the story its great and I love Manisha and Zayn

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz put the next chapter up i LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! plz i make up for 3 people!

@hazzed
3 more comments and ill update. :D

@hazzed
3 more comments and ill update. :D