Love Crushed - Comments, page 5

@Blaire
No problem :) maybe you can give me some tips on how to write my next one. Or if your friends can :)

@Lollipopliv123
Wait... Liam Payne from one direction is your cousin?!

Love your story!!!!!

@Blaire

Cool! And kayaking is fun I love kayaking I don't get to do it very often though. And when I go to Wolverhampton I have to stay with my uncle Liam(Liam Payne is my cousin but isn't named after my uncle Liam) I don't think I will be able to see cousin Liam anytime soon.

i like the fact that you're introducing the characters in your story when you write and the character desciption. So far its a good story, and thanks for writing it

@Lollipopliv123
Ooo fun!! I wish I was on a trip I start my freshman year this year so trying to do something to fill up the last part of this boring summer all I've been doing this summer is kayaking because its been pretty cold I'm California this summer other than this month.

@Blaire

Sweet I agree with

@metomlinson

The story I starting off perfect and I can't wait to read more! I'm in Canada right now it's so boring! But tomorrow I'm headed off to Wolverhampton I'm visiting for 4 weeks(almost a month) then to California then Ireland for a full month and back to America in North Carolina! Too much traviling for me and my beloved bestfriend and her boyfriend(my other bestfriend) just way too much!!

I might do another update tonight @metomlinson @lollipopliv123

@Blaire

i don't know, it's perfect to me.

@Blaire

Haha and it's not a problem at all it's a great story!

@Lollipopliv123
Haha thank you I am so honored that you loved my story!!

@metomlinson
Thank you is there something I should add or..

@Blaire

This is a really good story I like it and I am very picky when it comes to stories this one is starting out pretty well! Update soon!

its pretty good, I like it. I like how it has a background story.

@Madisyn
Thank you so much it means a lot!

That's awesome :)
might really like it. It seems so real I got images in my mind right now

Please update

<3 it :)