Inherent - Comments, page 2

I just finished Chapter 24, and it was SOOO cute!! Harry knows exactly what to do to make her happy! And who's favorite player isn't Molina? I mean really, Yadi the Hottie is clearly the best catcher a team could have! And a Cardinals/Cubs game? I've always wanted to go to one, but have never been able to! I'm so excited for their date! I feel that because of Harry, Julia has really made progress with trusting people and just being happy in general. I feel that Harry will definitely be ok when she tells him her secret. I feel like he'll be thinking 'That's it?' because if I were him I would be worrying that she killed a guy or something. Although, with Harry's iffy past that might not actually be that big of a deal either. I just feel that he would still love her (because we all already know that's how he feels, even if he hasn't figured it out yet) and be supportive of her no matter what. I just LOVE Harry in this story! He's being the perfect gentleman and is just so sweet and patient, but also strong and passionate. I love this story!

I just started reading this story, only on chapter three, but I love it already! Mostly because I'm a St. Louisian and the Cardinals are the best baseball team in the world and it's always great to hear that a person from Chicago likes them more than the Cubs. Actually, the story is pretty fantastic even without the Cardinals, although they are a bonus, and I can't wait to continue reading to fin out where it's going! I love that she's playing hard to get! It's great to read a story where the girl just doesn't automatically fall at the guys feet and love him. Can't wait for more!

I absolutely love this story and this chapter was amazing!! I cannot wait to see what happens next! :)

OMG!! LOVE this chapter. Definitely did not see things going that way, but it was such a great surprise. I love how gentle and caring Harry was towards Jules, allowing her to set the pace. Everything about this chapter was perfection. The way you describe them and their surroundings in your writing makes it so easy to picture in my head and it's just… seriously… it's perfect! Won't lie… makes me wish I was in Jules's shoes for a minute.

Can't wait to see what we find out about Harry's past in the next chapter. I'm extremely curious. I'm trying to remember the theories I had from reading previous chapters and they seem to be a bit elusive at the moment. haha! But I bet they'll come rushing back as soon as more details about his past are revealed. It's usually how my brain works! haha!

Keep up the brilliant work! Seriously one of the best stories I've read in ages! xoxo

wait what?! omgg we'll find out something about his past?! holy fucking shit i cant
and another intimate scene no no i cant
belle just stop ur killing me here like ur story is so perfect and ur writing is FLAWLESS to the point where i feel that this is just a dream like seriously how the fuck do u write like that? were u born with a gift from god or something like seriously wtf?
hahahahah :P
i woke up in the middle of the night and checked the time and saw it was 4 am so i put my phone back down but then i realized that u probably updated so i jumped out of bed like a volcano was erupting from underneath me and when i saw that u did...man i did a little happy dance and read it at 4 am hahaha :P even tho i had school i didnt give a fuck ;)
that chapter was so perfect...really. the way u described everything was just absolutely beautiful especially how he handled her with such care and just ughhhh i cant describe how amazing this chapter was...all i can say is....well fuck. lol.
this is getting way too long, i should probably stop hehe :P I AM LOVING THESE CHAPTERS AND I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE LIKE THESE <3 YAYYY :)

THNX FOR UPDATING SO SOON AND I HOPE U DO THAT AGAIN THIS TIME AS WELL <3
AND THANKS FOR SAYING THAT MY REVIEWS R AWESOME CUZ I JUST FEEL LIKE THEIR WEIRD AS FUCK. BYE NOW :D

@StarStruck14
Thank you!! I'm so happy you liked Harry's and Jules' interactions throughout this chapter. I had fun writing them, but was a little nervous about what you'd think. Your reassurances mean the absolute world to me, and I'm lucky to have such a wonderful reader :) Thank you so so much, again!

@exhaletruth
Wow. That's the first time anyone has ever called my writing 'art' and to say that I have a gift.... I actually can't even comprehend it. Thank you so, so, so much! I'm smiling like an idiot lol. I will definitely try to be a little more confident in my writing from now on, aha! Thanks again, you are too kind and awesome!!

@AisforAlisonotAmateur
Ah, thank you so much! You leave such awesome and entertaining reviews haha :) I can't tell you how happy I am that you liked this last chapter, and that it was actually worth the wait! I seriously appreciate the reassurance too, because I was super nervous about posting the last chapter, and am still a little hesitant to post the next! Haha. But it's going to be up in a few minutes, as soon as I have it formatted :)

Holy. Crap!! That last chapter was AMAZING!! Harry teasing Julia to get the answers he wanted was brilliant. Seeing Julia grow to the confident, more bold, woman she was with Harry in that chapter was incredible. But I also loved that she showed that vulnerability near the end when he went to go draw her a bath.

UGH!! I just loved everything about that chapter and I can't wait for the next one! I can't wait to see what happens and I can't wait to see how their characters further develop. And like everyone else has said so far, you have absolutely NO reason to feel insecure about your writing. You are an incredibly talented writer and you should be proud of the work you've written. :) xoxo

Let me begin with this chapter is showing us art in the making. I absolutely love this chapter their heated moment was written so amazingly. How you wrote Harry teasing Julia for answers was fantastic. Also the way you showed us how desperate they are for each other made me so happy that i was smiling like a goofball lol no worries tho :) You have an absolute gift. Like the previous comment said dont you dare feel insecure cuz you absolutly shouldnt You are art, your writing is art and you know exactly how to let us be apart of your genius. Thank you for updating youre awesome :)

if only u had seen my reaction to reading this chapter...if only. Ok i dont think i have ever said this but that chapter was so worth the wait. i was literally dreaming of a chapter like this for the entire month <3 thank u so goddamn much for taking the time to post this and edit it and keeping ur promise to put the chapter up on sunday (yes, i am the anon from tumblr that u said that to) u have no fucking idea how much i appreciate that :) dont u dare ever feel insecure about posting chapters like these cuz let me tell u....u r a fucking pro at writing these kinds of stuff ;)
i absolutely loved the chapter, i love how jules is opening up herself to harry, both physically and emotionally, and also how harry took what she said the way he did ;) i literally am on the edge of my seat waiting and wanting to read the upcoming chapters <3 ur writing is beautiful. Forever my favorite story :)
i know i seem calm writing this but i am actually screaming so hard lol :P i read this chapter on the way to school and everyone on my bus gave me weird looks to how i was reacting but i didnt give two fucks about them cuz i was reading my favorite story :D
hope this wasnt too long and boring belle :)

Congrats on the win!! I'm not surprised! Your story is amazing! :) And holy cliffhanger batman!! I have a feeling tears will be shed in the next chapter if Harry responds similarly to how he did in the elevator when they left Vivian's. I really hope he opens up a little bit more. AHHH!!! Just… so many feels! LOL!! Looking for to the next chapter!

congrats on the win :) although im not surprised
All the tension is about to be laid on the table. Harry better go easy on her shes still not feeling well. cant wait for the next chapter, my prediction is arguing,tears, n make up

Yay <3 im so happy that u won :* congrats sweetie, u totally deserved it...:)
Great chapter...i cant wait to see how harry will react...plz dont leave us hanging for too long <3
so excited for all the fluff moments :D :D xx.

@exhaletruth
I love it when they're all playful and cute too! Haha. There will definitely be more of that in upcoming chapters, I promise :) And thank you for the vote, Inherent won runner-up for best AU and I couldn't be happier!! xx

@StarStruck14
Thank you!! I'm so happy Harry knows now, too :) And I can't wait for you to read these next chapters either! Haha. Lots and lots of fluff and special moments for sure. xx

@AisforAlisonotAmateur
Hahaha, thank you so much for the comment! And also, thank you for voting. Inherent received runner-up for Best AU, which is amazing, seriously thank you!! It's no problem about responding to your comment either, I always try to whenever I have time! :) xx

awww i love it when julia and harry are playful with each other. i hope there is more of that when they spend more time together. i cant wait for the next update, ur updates are always amazing. congrats on the nomination im def gonna vote for you :)

AHHHH!!! So good!! So glad Harry knows everything now. At least as far as her heart condition goes. Really can't wait to see what happens next! Definitely looking forward to all the fluff and special moments between them! :) ;-)

SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT I CANT!!
I WAS SO HAPPY WHEN U UPDATED...AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH
sorry...im fine now...well sort of anyway..:D hehe
OH GOD PLZ POST THE CHAPTER....I SERIOUSLY WANNA FUCKING READ IT SO BAD!
PLEAASEE :D
i promise i vote for u every chance i get :D and i will continue to vote :D
thank u for answering my previous comment ;) <3