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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter) - Comments, page 27
@DangerouslyARainbow
Lmao yeah. But after she dies the investigation goes on with Doctor Luna. And then you'll find out WHY ____________ killed Eleanor. And other important information. Read my fanfiction 'Kill Him For Me, Please'? :)
Lmao yeah. But after she dies the investigation goes on with Doctor Luna. And then you'll find out WHY ____________ killed Eleanor. And other important information. Read my fanfiction 'Kill Him For Me, Please'? :)
@SammieStyles
I'm sad that it'll be over. I'll have to find new fanfictions to read.
And I really don't know
I'm sad that it'll be over. I'll have to find new fanfictions to read.
And I really don't know
@SammieStyles
lol yes , im a virgin . I just have a very ... creative ... mind . M.P.D is my newest story ^.^
lol yes , im a virgin . I just have a very ... creative ... mind . M.P.D is my newest story ^.^
@NiallsNandos
M.P.D? What's that?? And woah... are you a.. virgin? I know woah, tmi, tmi I'm very nosey #ExcuseMeForMyWeirdness
M.P.D? What's that?? And woah... are you a.. virgin? I know woah, tmi, tmi I'm very nosey #ExcuseMeForMyWeirdness
@SammieStyles
im 14 xD 15 this November haha . and im working on Two Of A Kind right now , then its gonna be M.P.D later , then its gonna be Bad Meets Evil , and if Brooke isn't back by then , then im gonna do Why Won't You Catch Me? .
im 14 xD 15 this November haha . and im working on Two Of A Kind right now , then its gonna be M.P.D later , then its gonna be Bad Meets Evil , and if Brooke isn't back by then , then im gonna do Why Won't You Catch Me? .
@NiallsNandos
You're my idol weather you like it or not lmao jk. And I consider you famous...better than Dark and Hanna the author no offense to her but ur wayyyy better. Once I read ur story....thanks to you..my standards are high lmao. And woah...you're the other person that suspects Becka...smart very smart. Will you please update Two Of A Kind or Bad Meets Evil, optional though and so yeah....how old are you?? Haha just asking or you could massage me if u don't feel comfortable or just like yeah lmao.
You're my idol weather you like it or not lmao jk. And I consider you famous...better than Dark and Hanna the author no offense to her but ur wayyyy better. Once I read ur story....thanks to you..my standards are high lmao. And woah...you're the other person that suspects Becka...smart very smart. Will you please update Two Of A Kind or Bad Meets Evil, optional though and so yeah....how old are you?? Haha just asking or you could massage me if u don't feel comfortable or just like yeah lmao.
@SammieStyles
lol when I read that , I was like "why the hell did she just compare me to a plastic dick ?" and then I read the other one and I was like "OHHHHHH ok ." haha . and im not famous , just a girl writing a fanfiction lol . I don't see how I can be an idol haha . and im not sure ... I wanna say its Nelly , but I also wanna say its Evan , but then I wanna say Zayn but I don't wanna say Zayn because he's one of Louis' best friends , and then I wanna say that cunt Becka ... but then what if its neither of the people she suspects ? I DONT KNOW !!!!! THIS IS DRIVING ME CRAZY !!
lol when I read that , I was like "why the hell did she just compare me to a plastic dick ?" and then I read the other one and I was like "OHHHHHH ok ." haha . and im not famous , just a girl writing a fanfiction lol . I don't see how I can be an idol haha . and im not sure ... I wanna say its Nelly , but I also wanna say its Evan , but then I wanna say Zayn but I don't wanna say Zayn because he's one of Louis' best friends , and then I wanna say that cunt Becka ... but then what if its neither of the people she suspects ? I DONT KNOW !!!!! THIS IS DRIVING ME CRAZY !!
@NiallsNandos
:o Sorry...didn't know u would reply since your famous n' stuff. But yeah your like my dildo... I apologize :$
:o Sorry...didn't know u would reply since your famous n' stuff. But yeah your like my dildo... I apologize :$
@SammieStyles
its fine , just ask next time . if you just do it without my permission , then I get the impression that you're one of the many people stealing from me too .
its fine , just ask next time . if you just do it without my permission , then I get the impression that you're one of the many people stealing from me too .
@NiallsNandos
I know sorry, I'm not dirty and your...an 'expert' if that makes sense. I can change it more if you want. No harm or offense :(
I know sorry, I'm not dirty and your...an 'expert' if that makes sense. I can change it more if you want. No harm or offense :(
Chapter 16- ... that shower sex scene sounded a lot like mine ...
(Mine)
Once every single article of clothing was off, I stepped in the shower and as soon as I did, I was pushed up against the wall. He grabbed the backs of my thighs and lifted them up, giving him easy access.
"I need you baby." He said huskily. "Right. Fucking. Now."
Without warning, he slammed into me, letting out a loud throaty groan and making me let out a moan/scream. He found a rhythm quickly and was thrusting hard, but at a medium pace so I could feel him better.
"Fuck baby! Still so fucking tight!" He groaned.
"Faster!" I moaned, holding onto his neck for dear life.
He stepped back, taking me off the shower wall, and started making me bounce on his dick while he thrusted fast at the same time. Once I felt him hit my g-spot, I let out the loudest moan my lungs would hold.
"Right there Harry! Don't stop!"
His head was thrown back and loud, pleasure-filled groans were escaping his mouth. His thrusts were getting sloppier and I could tell he was close, and so was I.
"I'm gonna cum!" I shouted.
Right after I did, I came hard while screaming his name, and my body was shaking. He pulled out and squirted his juices all over my boobs and my stomach, groaning as he did so.
(Yours)
I stepped in the shower and as soon as I did, I was pushed up against the wall. He grabbed the backs of my thighs and lifted them up, giving him easy access.
"I need you baby." He said, his voice raspy. "Right. Fucking. Now."
Without warning, he slammed into me, letting out a loud throaty groan and making me let out a moan/scream. He found a rhythm quickly and was thrusting hard.
"Fuck baby! You're so fucking tight!" He groaned.
"Faster..." I moaned, holding onto his neck.
He took me off the shower wall, and started making me bounce on his dick while he thrusted fast at the same time. Once I felt him hit my g-spot, I let out the loudest moan.
"Right there Louis! Don't stop baby.."
His head was thrown back and loud, pleasure-filled groans were escaping his mouth. His thrusts were getting sloppier and I could tell he was close, and so was I.
"I'm gonna cum" I moaned.
Right after I did, I came hard while screaming his name.He pulled out and squirted his juices all over my chest and my stomach, groaning as he did so.
(Mine)
Once every single article of clothing was off, I stepped in the shower and as soon as I did, I was pushed up against the wall. He grabbed the backs of my thighs and lifted them up, giving him easy access.
"I need you baby." He said huskily. "Right. Fucking. Now."
Without warning, he slammed into me, letting out a loud throaty groan and making me let out a moan/scream. He found a rhythm quickly and was thrusting hard, but at a medium pace so I could feel him better.
"Fuck baby! Still so fucking tight!" He groaned.
"Faster!" I moaned, holding onto his neck for dear life.
He stepped back, taking me off the shower wall, and started making me bounce on his dick while he thrusted fast at the same time. Once I felt him hit my g-spot, I let out the loudest moan my lungs would hold.
"Right there Harry! Don't stop!"
His head was thrown back and loud, pleasure-filled groans were escaping his mouth. His thrusts were getting sloppier and I could tell he was close, and so was I.
"I'm gonna cum!" I shouted.
Right after I did, I came hard while screaming his name, and my body was shaking. He pulled out and squirted his juices all over my boobs and my stomach, groaning as he did so.
(Yours)
I stepped in the shower and as soon as I did, I was pushed up against the wall. He grabbed the backs of my thighs and lifted them up, giving him easy access.
"I need you baby." He said, his voice raspy. "Right. Fucking. Now."
Without warning, he slammed into me, letting out a loud throaty groan and making me let out a moan/scream. He found a rhythm quickly and was thrusting hard.
"Fuck baby! You're so fucking tight!" He groaned.
"Faster..." I moaned, holding onto his neck.
He took me off the shower wall, and started making me bounce on his dick while he thrusted fast at the same time. Once I felt him hit my g-spot, I let out the loudest moan.
"Right there Louis! Don't stop baby.."
His head was thrown back and loud, pleasure-filled groans were escaping his mouth. His thrusts were getting sloppier and I could tell he was close, and so was I.
"I'm gonna cum" I moaned.
Right after I did, I came hard while screaming his name.He pulled out and squirted his juices all over my chest and my stomach, groaning as he did so.
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