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I think the most he'll be able to do is kiss her. But no sex, she said he sucked at it so... And I feel like she going to tell harry after the fact.

Nicolette Cheridon
8/27/13

@Lalaland
First of all, thank you for taking time to write that! Haha, but I agree.. I want this to be as realistic as possible and not your predictable fanfiction, but you will have to wait and see what goes down :)

thank you so much though, I'm really glad you like it!

HazzaGirl
8/27/13

I honestly love this story so much,, as far as constructive criticism goes I'm just gonna say I hope its not one of those reveals where Harry or someone else seen them then he freaks out & they break up.. I would rather see Aubrey tell him herself because she feels super guilty THEN he freaks out & they break up, Ethan tries t have sex with her & Harry rushes in all "knight-in-shining-armour" like and HOPEFULLY Rachel makes an appearance having something to do with the baby !

I'm not saying it'll suck if this isn't how it turns out in your story ! I'm positive I'll love it anyway, but this is how I would like the story to come about.

Keep writing, you're amazing at it !

Lalaland
8/27/13

update soon pleaze

TayTay
8/27/13

yeah i agree with @trumoo15... so please... :D

Directioner_xx
8/27/13

yeah i agree with @trumoo15... so please... :D

Directioner_xx
8/27/13

Update again tonight please :) xoxo

NarryLover123
8/27/13

update soon pleaze

TayTay
8/27/13

I think Ethan is going to try and get her back..please update again tonight

trumoo15
8/27/13

Yay! Sequel and ou la la studying (; but nooo Ethan!-.-

onelovebaby
8/27/13

I think harry is gonna conincedentally run into ethan and aubrey. And when ethan sees harry, ethans gonna kiss her to make it look like shes cheating. UPDATE!

Horan_Malik
8/26/13

Ooohhh. Ethan's back. Dun dun dun. Update soon plz! <3