Sinning ⇼ Harry Styles - Comments, page 24

@exiiliious
YES!!! ;)Definitely an interesting read :)

@Canadianeeh
That's pretty close to what I have in mind. :) X.

I know it might sound horrriibleeee on what I'm about to say. Buttttt....

A good story has conflict, and has unrealistic happenings in it. None taken to the aunt/mum, but it'd be really interesting to read about her death, the main character's reaction, and then how Harry copes with it. Maybe even she'll move in with him like they'd planned earlier?
I'm not sure, but I know what it's like wanting ideas from readers. Soo, there's my input.
Tragety, unfortunately, is attracting to the human eye. Without conflict or tragity, people tend to become bored.
Maybe even throwing in a cliff hanger next chapter would be awesome :) Everyone loves the adrenaline of it, but hate the wait!
Sorry; RANT OVER :D (Love the book by the way!)

@Harryskitty
I'll try

Love this story! Update please! :)

@TexasDreamer
:)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

@baby
Thaaanks! <3

LOVE LOVE LOVE

@Meowimafishy
Yeah, sure, I'll check it out. X.

@AllTimeTay
Haha :) X

@tonandosandbeyond
I'll try! Thanks X.

Hey! I hate to ask you to do this, I'm sorry. But see I'm trying a fan fic and was wondering if you'd read it and tell me if you like it so far. It's just the first chapter. I'm really sorry I know it's annoying its just I wanted your opinion

Her dad seems a bit all over the place, but I can tell that this dinner is his way of trying. I think it will go well, but I have an eerie feeling that something might happen and harry will have to step in..

Her dad seems a bit all over the place, but I can tell that this dinner is his way of trying. I think it will go well, but I have an eerie feeling that something might happen and harry will have to step in..

@exiiliious
thanks:D

Update!! Awesome story :)

@HARRYS_GRAVEY_LOVER
I'll tryy <3

Update

@Meowimafishy
Thanksss ! <3 X