Simple Mistake - Comments

its not rubbish, i think its really good. so plz keep updating!

its not rubbish, i think its really good. so plz keep updating!

@Becx
Aha yeah :)

@Sara
Thank you so much!

oo awesome chapter

Aww they're too cute! :)

@louis_zayn_niall_liam_harry_
13 tomorrow! 31st! I know I'm young to be writing stories but I like writing fiction, I hav a big imagination, maybe to big...aha

@Full Luna

Thanks! Great advice :)

This is cute! You're writing is progressing with each chapter! My advice, don't write just to update. Wrist because you want to continue the story for you. Only then will it be worth your time hon. And that's also when you have you best work.

@NiallHoranisGorgeous

oh how old are you?

@louis_zayn_niall_liam_harry_
Yeah Haha and it's not me I'm too young for the story

lol ok

@NiallHoranisGorgeous

oh,Like your story! Ahah. Is that u in the pic of ur story?

@louis_zayn_niall_liam_harry_
Tayla :)

@Sara

Be patient Sara,I'm only going to b on chapter 4,who knows what will happen later on ;)

@NiallHoranisGorgeous
1) Thanks! 2) Yup thats me 3) Cool,whats yours?

Aw I was hoping Louis would get the girl :(

1• I love it so far! 2•is the photo you? 3•I like your name, mines similar

@louis_zayn_niall_liam_harry_

Great! :)

@Becx

Thanks! I really appreciate it! My name is pronounced Kay-la by the way. Most people think its Ky-la. And I will most likely write the next chapter later today or in a few mins!