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Loved You First (Sequel to Simon's Daughter) - Comments, page 7
Hey everyone check out Tears of the Broken
If you like it please send feedback so I can continue the story, thanks :)
xoxo
~Gabrielle
If you like it please send feedback so I can continue the story, thanks :)
xoxo
~Gabrielle
What if Niall and Julia get in a fight and she storms off with Lexi to wherever and in the car ride they get in a terrible car accident which leaves Julia somewhat injured and Lexi severely injured....orrr Julia could go out one night with the girls and she is kidnapped. And within chapters you could have a POV of both Julia trying to escape and Niall trying to find her. That would put a lot of suspense into the story.
When Niall leaves he should go clubbing,get drunk,get with some girl and the paparazzi takes pictures.Julies sees and gets depressed end the relationship and meets a guy a Starbucks he treats her like a princess and makes her feel special.So Niall comes back to Juila 3 moths later he find the guy,Juila and Lexi having a great time.He leaves depressed and the next thing he knows he's naked with a naked blond next to him.He leaves to apolized to Juila and they make up but are still not together.And when their in the park the blond girl calls Niall and tells him she's pregnet.
@Annalynn_Styles
I think this is an AWESOME idea! Its sad but i could see it work if you elaborate it more.
I think this is an AWESOME idea! Its sad but i could see it work if you elaborate it more.
when niall leaves he gets in a drunken accident in england then the paparazzi takes picture of him and a girl kissing and julia finds out then they get into an arument then they end the relationship then a month later lexi wants to see niall and julia takes her but then when she gets there niall is with a girl and julia gets sad and angry then she's going home but she is crying at the same time then her vision becomes blurry then gets in a car accident and ends up in the hostpital
@Lucy_Kavanagh
Well I'm not the author so.... I mean I didn't do anything. I don't know if you know I wasn't being mean but I wasn't. :)))
Well I'm not the author so.... I mean I didn't do anything. I don't know if you know I wasn't being mean but I wasn't. :)))
No please don't end this story it's one of the best on here!! You just have some writers block, it'll pass soon so please don't end it ): / (:
Pleaseeee dont end the story, i love this story you're a suuuuper good writer. PLEASEEEE DONT STOP!!!! Xoxo
9/4/13