That was then, This is now - Comments, page 23

OMG that was too sweet! I'm portuguese and while i don't find amo-te a particularly beautiful word ( i much perfer "i love you") i found this pretty awesome. Also your effort, and also harry's, to incorporate portuguese is amazing! I love your story, i love their journey! Amo this story actually!

Sorry for my english, like i said i'm portuguese.

OH GOD ! THIS IS SO GOOD !!! I THINK IM GONNA CRY !! :') AMAZING <3 I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEEEE THE WAY U WRITE :) ITS SO ...... DEEP AND ITS LIKE IM REALLY THE CHARACTER. AND THATS HOW GOOD STORIES ARE :)

@AreWeDifferentOrTheSame and @Stefanilovesonedirection I'll keep writing as long as you keep reading and enjoying it!! :D

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@Gladys Oh sorry but I really don't feel confortable having the story in other blogs or website.. It's just because if I tell you yes I have to say it to everyone who asks and I do not want the story to spread to other websites... Sorry!!! Hope you keep reading though :(

I told them the good things about this story, too bad, ;(they just do not speak perfect English, and I have a passion ;D family lives in England in Bradford. Through this I have to know English. And my friends do not have the enthusiasm to translate it. ;(It is said it is difficult to :(a pity, ';(

I love this book and you are a great author keep writing

This is awesome!!!!!! Keep writing it.

Omg!!!!! Loved it!!!!

@DreamLand
What can i say .. ? I in love with ur story <3 ;)

@directstyles02 I doooon'ttt kkknnnnooooooowwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! O.o

P.S.: Your my dear are extremely fast, I just updated like one minute ago and you've already read and commented it!! Loved it, big shoutout to you!! <3

@Gladys Poland!! I have friends there!! Humm well, first I feel flatered of course that you want to translate it but to be honest I don't feel very confortable about it.. It's not you, it's just I don't want my story to spread to other websites sorry!! But you can always still translate it to them just don't post it online please.. or maybe your friends can come here and read it, do they understand english??
Thanks for understanding :)

Btw what did you tell them about the story that made them interested about it??

What r mia and el hiding ??? :O :O

@lalaladooo Weeeeell can't ruin the suspense so you have to read more to find out!! Tell me your reaction to that part when you reach that chapter.. ;) Thanks!

@directioner_4_life and @LifeChangingMoments Don't have to wait more babies!! :D

@AreWeDifferentOrTheSame Not at all, but actually it's funny you said because something quite similar yet a bit different will happen.. It's something about the movie and Mia yeah but thanks though, ALWAYS feel free to give me your ideas/opinions!! ;)

@directstyles02 Ahah I laughed so hard at your comment.. Well dad's don't usually get it.. ;) To vote you go to the right side of the page and below the stats it says "Rate this story" and choose the number of stars you think the story is worth!

Amazing story... can't wait for more... update???

Please update !!!!!!

I have a small question ... I'm Polish and I really liked this fanfiction, I told a friend about it and some girl. They asked me to translate it for them. I put special blog. And now this is my question. Can I place the translation of this fanfiction? It is really fanastic :) And what is a blog, I wrote that this is not my only your fan fiction. :) It could? Please .....

Gladys from Poland

ok so i kinda just started reading the sequel (im on chpater 11 now) and is it just me or do Zoey and Mia look LIKE FREAKIN TWINS. O_O

MAYBE IM BLIND.....

My dad came in while i was reading this and saw me smiling and squealing like an idiot than checked my forehead then patted my head and left :P
how do u 'vote' btw? ..., im new on this site so .. :P

@DreamLand
Yeah i know its Mia .. :P
but i meant that i love sasha as mia's character <3