STORY REVIEW

(For my currently on-going story "The Donation")

I know I've tried to ask for help before but now I am really in need.

If anyone is willing I need to know some details about my story.
It officially now has 9 chapters (10 if you include the prologue) and 10 votes; but the rating is 8.6
I am not here to complain but if anyone is willing- please tell me what is wrong and I will fix it. I know the first few chapters sucked at identifying who at the moment was talking but I've improved that.

Please. Anyone. I need someone to tell me these things:

1. What is good
2. What I could do better
3. Is the so far plot confusing/is the story line okay
4. Is the story flow okay
5. And if it is worth continuing

Please I will beg anyone to help. Thank you in advance.

Abygail

♡♡♡

I'm on it, lovely. Is it "The Donation" I've started reading it and I love it but I'll certainly review it

@Perfect_All_Night
Yes, it is. And thank you, I really appreciate it

@Perfect_All_Night
Welp now my story is at 7.3 rating. kms

@abygail.bauman
I gave it a ten :D

@Perfect_All_Night
Thank you so much ((((: you made my night so much better

@abygail.bauman
You're welcome my lovely. Very welcome