Feedback Please?

Hey guys. Recently I started a new story and I just wanted some feedback on how its going. If anyone could please go check it out I would love that! Thank you so much ♥♥

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/82294/In-The-Lonely-Hour/

I really love it!

Just, I honestly don't quite understand the plot? Is Harry the lion? (Probs) Why did you refer to him as the lion? I can see how Juliet is the sheep.

What is Harry planning to do?

I love how your story isn't cliché, Juliet isn't perfect and I can tell.

( Could I get some feedback as well, for my story Red Queen? I'm not sure whether or not people will enjoy it... )

@Luminescent
Well I can't really tell you what Harry's going to do.. It's not really what he's going to do it just how he approaches it.. You'll just have to find out :)

And Yes I will definitely check out your story too!! ♥

@briannamelton
Thank you!

Obviously you can't tell me what Harry's gunna do lol.

That would spoil everything...

Yeah, I'm excited for this honestly. I loved Daddy's Girl, loving Break On Me