New story idea

So I just got an idea about two girls; both are twins who were separated at birth. One got to live with there high class mother and the other with there party animal dad. Both the parents wanted custody of the two but didn't decide, so they thought of a comprise; one takes each.

Now there not the type of parents who let's there child see there mother or father for a period of time. Both the girls never got to see both of there guardians, and they never really knew each other.

So when the two meet with a vacation to the Bahamas, they find out secrets there parents have been keeping from them. But with the distraction of two of there friends, it wasn't going to be easy.

How is it?

@strawberries.
Honestly. I like it. It sounds like a different version of The Parent Trap. But I loved that movie, and I think you should stick with this idea because it's really good and you'd be able to write it nicely :)

@xXKaleighStyles57Xx
Aww thanks! Would you mind writing with me?

@strawberries.
Ha. If you want me to :)

@xXKaleighStyles57Xx
Lol okay. I'll add you

i agree, its a little parent trap sounding and mary-sue. you're a good writter though so i totally believe you could pull it off x