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Stephanie Welsh has had a hard life - things would have been easier on her though if it wasn't her best friend who threw her into this mess in the first place.
warning: drug references, alcohol abuse, rape, death, violence, language, self harm, triggers.
ps: I'd really like some feedback and criticism if possible; so.. any would do amazingly!
Stephanie Welsh has had a hard life - things would have been easier on her though if it wasn't her best friend who threw her into this mess in the first place.
warning: drug references, alcohol abuse, rape, death, violence, language, self harm, triggers.
ps: I'd really like some feedback and criticism if possible; so.. any would do amazingly!
Eyes Open
"The people going into the The Deadly Games are Emily Banks, Ryan Banks, Harry Styles, Niall Horan, Louis Tomlinson, Liam Payne, and Zayn Malik."
Everything went silent no one said a word. No one volunteered to go in the games to replace one of us. I started to walk to the stage when I seem the rest of them walking. We all looked at each other knowing not all of us could survive. We all might die, or one of us might win. The worst part of it all wasn't the fear of dying or knowing I might die. It was knowing that I might have to kill my brother or my best friends.
So it's technically a Hunger Games story based off of the song Eyes Open by Taylor Swift. It only has two chapters so far and the boys aren't in it a lot right now but they will be soon. I hope who ever reads it enjoys it. :)
Pour Tourjours:
17 year old Annabelle Davison was living the perfect life. I mean, how good does a new dress every month, unlimited light at a push of a button, and the ever-so-speedy telegraph to contact her mother back home sound?
A life full of luxury, that would be considered.
'How is this the perfect life?’, some of you may ask. ‘Where the hell does she live?’ might be a common question. But, the real question you should be asking is not where, but when, when she lived. Annabelle Davison lives in La Conner, Washington, a perfectly, normal yet small, town. But when, that’s the real shocker.
Annabelle Davison, 17 years old, lived in 1874.
Annabelle is very happy in La Conner, with her only problem being a boy who she knows everything about not even know her name. When Annabelle dies in a terrible marine fire, she gets cursed, fated to live eternally and haunt in her own home until she gets the one that she cared for most, James Ellers, to love her in her broken form.
But, how can she get someone to love her when she’s a ghost who cannot leave her own house, and he’s happily married and doens't even know her? You can’t, and Annabelle, heartbroken, realized that too late.
Annabelle shuts herself out, scaring away everyone who dares to move into the house that’s Annabelle’s own exile. But, when a young man moves in Liam Payne, who happens to be a splitting image of James, does Annabelle have another chance to rest in peace?
Will Liam fall for the ruined girl who was cursed to never love again? Will Annabelle return to solitude, to be cast away?
Pour Tourjours, or forever, as her mother would say. Forever in love, or forever in exile?
That's my extended summary thing for the story....
Hope you check it out!
17 year old Annabelle Davison was living the perfect life. I mean, how good does a new dress every month, unlimited light at a push of a button, and the ever-so-speedy telegraph to contact her mother back home sound?
A life full of luxury, that would be considered.
'How is this the perfect life?’, some of you may ask. ‘Where the hell does she live?’ might be a common question. But, the real question you should be asking is not where, but when, when she lived. Annabelle Davison lives in La Conner, Washington, a perfectly, normal yet small, town. But when, that’s the real shocker.
Annabelle Davison, 17 years old, lived in 1874.
Annabelle is very happy in La Conner, with her only problem being a boy who she knows everything about not even know her name. When Annabelle dies in a terrible marine fire, she gets cursed, fated to live eternally and haunt in her own home until she gets the one that she cared for most, James Ellers, to love her in her broken form.
But, how can she get someone to love her when she’s a ghost who cannot leave her own house, and he’s happily married and doens't even know her? You can’t, and Annabelle, heartbroken, realized that too late.
Annabelle shuts herself out, scaring away everyone who dares to move into the house that’s Annabelle’s own exile. But, when a young man moves in Liam Payne, who happens to be a splitting image of James, does Annabelle have another chance to rest in peace?
Will Liam fall for the ruined girl who was cursed to never love again? Will Annabelle return to solitude, to be cast away?
Pour Tourjours, or forever, as her mother would say. Forever in love, or forever in exile?
That's my extended summary thing for the story....
Hope you check it out!
@Harry_Louis_Niall_Liam_Zayn
Ohhhh the hunger games! Funny you should right about that because we were talking about it before.
@warmachinerox1
ARGGGHHHHH A LIAM STORY; OH MY BEAUTIFUL CHRIST DEAR MERCY PANCAKE! I love Liam stories... sorry just got a little excited.
@punkrockshow
SO I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO LOVES THEM???????? YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I SERIOUSLY NEED TO SLAP THE SENSE INTO ALL THESE WRITERS CAUSE THERE ARE LITERALLY LIKE 3 LIAM STORIES OUT ONE HERE LIKE JESUS CHRIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@warmachinerox1
I'd write Liam, honestly I would - but I don't know where to start with him! He features and is going to be a huge part in one of my stories..but ughh.. my heart skips a beat when I see Liam's name pop up!
@punkrockshow
I KNOW RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't know it was possible to be jealous of a fictional character but here I am, trying not to punch Annabelle in the face hahahahahaha
I don't understand why people don't like Liam though!!!!!! Like I'll be with my directioner friends and they'll be like "Ohhhh Liam's sooooo ugggglayyyy"
And I'll be like "Bitch da fuqqq are you on??? You seein straight??????"
@punkrockshow
I just realized I can't punch my character in the face cause she's a ghost...... Great thinking Jillian way to go
hahahahahahahahaha I'm actually like stupid right now like WTF did I just say hahaha
@warmachinerox1
I even have a gay friend who thinks Liam's attractive so any argument the have is invalid.
Jasey knew that by moving out to LA for college, she'd be able to start over. Get away from the past and move forward. New people enter her life: her roommates, new friends, and even the boys of One Direction. But fame can be a tricky thing to deal with...
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/42322/Fall-Quarter/
Pumping this back up again!
I've got two I'd really like some feedback on:
Cheap Romantics and Black & Blue :)
My Destiny Is Unspoken;
Can Willow trust the only person she loves? Even when the Devil lives inside her? But will the Boy save her from the Devil or will the Devil save her from the boy?
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/42399/My-Destiny-Is-Unspoken/
Can Willow trust the only person she loves? Even when the Devil lives inside her? But will the Boy save her from the Devil or will the Devil save her from the boy?
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/42399/My-Destiny-Is-Unspoken/
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/42608/Broken-Hearts-And-Dirty-Windows/
'Try sleeping with a broken heart'
Broken Hearts And Dirty Windows
'Try sleeping with a broken heart'
Broken Hearts And Dirty Windows
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/42673/Revenge-On-Perrie-Edwards/
My is name Perrie Edwards. And this my story of how I came to be:
July 10, 1993- Today
Wishing Good Memories, Our Beloved Friend, Sister, Family Member. May Now Rest In Peace.My advice: Never Trust People Who You Think You Know
Revenge On Perrie Edwards
My is name Perrie Edwards. And this my story of how I came to be:
July 10, 1993- Today
Wishing Good Memories, Our Beloved Friend, Sister, Family Member. May Now Rest In Peace.My advice: Never Trust People Who You Think You Know
Revenge On Perrie Edwards
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/42891/Almost-There/
Erica Harlow was practically a shadow, the girl at the back of the classroom who scarcely was acknowledged and lived without much of a social life.
With this in mind, she expected a fairly uneventful junior year of high school, just another three hundred sixty-five days down.
However when a mysterious texter leaves Erica with not only the fear of an unknown stalker but also a cocky, egotistical boxing trainer who might just be a sexy, overprotective version of Prince Charming, junior year gets a bit more complicated.
Almost There
Erica Harlow was practically a shadow, the girl at the back of the classroom who scarcely was acknowledged and lived without much of a social life.
With this in mind, she expected a fairly uneventful junior year of high school, just another three hundred sixty-five days down.
However when a mysterious texter leaves Erica with not only the fear of an unknown stalker but also a cocky, egotistical boxing trainer who might just be a sexy, overprotective version of Prince Charming, junior year gets a bit more complicated.
Almost There
Things can change…
Summary:
Its about a girl named chelsea who undergoes some changes some for the better some for the worse. This story has surprising twists and changes every where, i hope you enjoy!
(i just started it but i will update every day or every other day)
4/5/14