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Payne of the Past
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Title: Payne of the Past
Author: Allie Miller
Book Link: Payne of the Past
Review: It was pretty good for a long story.
Now, this may not be true for anyone but myself, but the lot of gifs and pictures in a way distracted me. There were misspelled words but that's normal. I actually really liked it- it's just not my cup of tea
My Opinion: I liked it! But like I said earlier, it's not my personal choice of fanfictions I like to read.
Rating: 7/10
Story Grammar: Pretty good (:
Story Flow: Good- I got lost at a few places but it was good.
Tips: If need be, just watch your misspells and such.
Recommendation: 7/10
- Title: Payne of the Past
- Author: Allie Miller
- Number of chapters: 55
- Band (One Direction or 5SOS): One Direction
- Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): R
- Link: Payne of the Past
- Genre(s): Romance Drama Teen
Title: Payne of the Past
Author: Allie Miller
Book Link: Payne of the Past
Review: It was pretty good for a long story.
Now, this may not be true for anyone but myself, but the lot of gifs and pictures in a way distracted me. There were misspelled words but that's normal. I actually really liked it- it's just not my cup of tea
My Opinion: I liked it! But like I said earlier, it's not my personal choice of fanfictions I like to read.
Rating: 7/10
Story Grammar: Pretty good (:
Story Flow: Good- I got lost at a few places but it was good.
Tips: If need be, just watch your misspells and such.
Recommendation: 7/10
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8/19/18