i was walking down the highstreet looking through shop windows for a nice dress to wear to my sisters upcoming birthday. i walked past a shop i had never been in before but i saw the most gorgeous dress in the window so i went in to look at it.

Hi im hatti and im 20 years old. My sister is goiing to be 16 in a couple of days and need a dress for her party. i am 16 stone and size 28. my weight embarasses me but i could become more self confident.

i shuffled my fingers through the rack and found a size 18. i put it up to my body to see if it would fit and heard laughing coming from around me. i looked around the room but could not see anyone. i then looked out of the window and saw 5 boys staring at me and 4 of them were laughing the other was just staring at me in a weird way. i looked down at my dress and realised i had picked up a size 8 instead of 18.i shuved the dress back on to the rack and stormed out of the shop. i walked down the highstreet to the carpack in which i had parked my car.i drove a blue ford and it was a bit battered it up but i liked it.

When i got to my car i looked into my bag for my keys which took me a while as my bag was massive. i could hear the 5 boys apporaching behind me.
''that ass is so big it can be used as a sofa'' a crly hair'd boy badly joked.
''lard ass'' a boy with a ski sloped type of hair shouted,
'here fatty fatty fatty'' the boldish one called
''urmm oh my turn urrmmm, your fat'' the blonde short one said in a irish accent.
i was used to the hate so i carried on looking for my keys. i could hear them all muttering to the quiet one behind me. he was obviously nicer than the others as he hadnt said anything mean or laughed at me. however i didnt care i wanted to get out of there.

''get off me get off me'' i shouted as the curly one pinned me to the floor and the other boys were pulling at my hair and clothes. the small blonde irish one was going through my bad and knicked my car keys phone and purse. i shut my eyes tightly i juts hoped it would alll be over soon. suddenly i felt weight lifted off me. i opened up my eyes to see the shy nice one lifting the boys off me and away from my belongings. he punched the curly one in the face and the rest ran away.

he looked more secy now and his muscles looked bigger. i was rather attracted to him. i could not think about this right now. i had just been mugged. he pulled me up off the ground and asked me if i was alright. i just nodded at him and he passed me my bag. he gave me my keys and purse and phone of the ground and just smilled at me.
''do you need to go to the hospital?'' he asked in calm polite voice.
''i,i,im fine i promise. this happens all the time'' i replied.
''what people mug you all the time?'' he asked.
''well i get the hate every second of my life.''i looked to the floor as i spoke
''why your beautiful you shouldnt listen to them boys'' he wanted to keep the conversation going.
i looked at him with a disaproving look and pointed to my stomach.
''im fat....''
he looked like he had nothing to say but then came out with the most beautiful words.
''you are beautiful on the inside and on the inside. you a like a delicate rose. noone cares for the stem just the pettles and the smell. the pettles are your beauty and the smell is a beautiful personality''.
i blushed. ''why would you be friends with those boys anyway?'' i asked in a suspoious way.
''im in a band one direction have you heard of it? well basically im in a contract and have to stay for five years'' he explained.
i looked shocked one direction played the most amazing music but i had never seen a picture of them but i just looked at him and said ''oh''
he looked back at me and said ''my name is louis give me your phone'' i looked confused but handed my phone.He put his number in the phone and handed it back to me '' i would like to see you again''. i looked at him while blushing bright red.
''oh my name is hatti'' i said to him as i climed into my car...

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