You Wanna Know?

Not many chapters, not much to judge on.

No character development (but it was only early in the story)

I like how Macy is surrounded by war with her dad, brother and Jack.

You have written Macy well, it’s clear that she is broken and needs some solid support, someone who is stable.

Again, I like the whole war theme since there isn’t much of that in the story, it’s cool how you do occasional jack and Daniel POV’s with their nightmares and flashbacks, sounded realistic.

I can’t really give you an accurate review since there are only 3 chapters.

I liked what I have read so far, I will definitely be reading what else you post. Congratulations, cause you just gained a NEW SUBSCRIBER!!!
~Sophalicious

Notes

Another review!
So sorry that it took so long to upload this one...
Don't be afraid to message me with another review!!!
Love you guys!!!