You Wanna Know?

Okay here is the shit. I feel like a lot of stories on this website are pretty much the same, you know what I mean?

Clearly you are a dancer or someone you know is a dancer because you knew a lot about the terms of the steps and such. I am a dancer, and it really annoys me when people write stuff, thinking that they know what they are talking about when they really don’t so thank you for that.

So some points to improve on:

A lot of the stories on this website are basically the same. They all have a different way that the girl meets one direction but after that they follow roughly the same storyline. I kinda felt like yours did too.

Ever read a story and feel like you are only continuing reading it because you have to? I felt like that at some points, it kind of lacked intensity in some areas but not all, so maybe that’s something you would want to look at…

Other than that your story was good. Weren’t any spelling or grammatical errors and you spelt all the dance moves right so I am happy with that.

I would recommend this story to a friend.
~Sophalicious

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