You Wanna Know?

I don’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings or anything but at the same time I have to say my honest opinion.

Some parts of it were kind of boring, I felt like I was only reading it because I have to you know?

Spelling and grammar were also a little off too. A lot of the time you didn’t write or only wrote one set of quotation marks which was kind of confusing because I didn’t know if the person had stopped talking.

Also when a new person talks it’s probably best to start on a new line, otherwise you end up with huge chunky paragraphs.

On the plus side, Leslie is really cool, I like how she is so blunt and honest. I also like that the roles in this story change. Usually it’s the girl getting abused and 1D saves her but this time the girl saves the guy so that was cool.

The storyline is original, there aren’t many other stories on this website that I have read that have the boys in danger or whatever.

I also really liked the whole guns, secrets, spy kind of theme that you have written!

Overall I think it was a pretty good story, rating would probably be about 7 or 7 ½ /10.

Keep updating babe!

Notes

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