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Payne of the past

First of all, I love your story, I have been a fan of it since forever.

There aren’t many stories on here that I have cared about the outcome as much as I cared in this story.

My favourite character is obviously Bailey, she is so relatable and just seems really real (if that makes sense) and I really wanted her relationship with Niall to work out, I still hope it does!

You’re writing style is also great, it’s so easy to read and structured amazingly for impact, whichever characters viewpoint a chapter is written in its almost like you’re there watching it happen through their eyes.

Okay so points to improve on

There wasn’t much character development, even after everything that she went through Bailey still goes back to Liam, Liam is still cheating on her she is still hurting herself, then again the story isn’t over yet so we’ll see.

I love how you add gifs and images into the story, made it so much easier to read and understand, you didn’t have to write long boring paragraphs going into exact detail cause you had the pics.

Overall rating: 9/10

I would definitely recommend this!!! Keep updating!

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