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Broken Strings review
Okay, your story Broken Strings is good. It is really good and I like it a lot. I don’t know where it is going (that is good cause I love surprises) but I can see many great possibilities. Your character’s personalities are clear and they show a lot when the character talks. In the beginning I was kind of like “This is confusing, where is this going” but after reading a few chapters I totally understood and I think the last few especially are amazing.

I click on a story if the cover looks interesting. Check. Yours is mysterious and intriguing. Then I will click on the first chapter if I like the summary at the beginning. Check. Your summary is so cool. It makes me want to read more.

Here is the problem, what I do, and what I know a lot of people do is I will stop reading the story and find another one if the first few chapters aren’t dramatic or interesting enough. My only critique is that people may read the first few chapters, not understand them and say “Screw it! This doesn’t make any sense” before reading the rest and letting it make sense.

Overall, I think it is good. It is mysterious and full or drama and there are a lot of twists and turns in the plot. I can see lots of possibilities for the future of this story. It could be amazing and dramatic and get lots of votes if you play your cards right.
~Sophalicious

DEAR OTHER PEOPLE
Broken Strings is a really good story. I would rate it 6/10 and i would reccomend that you go check it out!

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