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First of all, LOVED IT! Second of all, LOVED IT EVEN MORE!

You ever read a story and get so into it that you forget you are supposed to be reviewing it?

Parts of it even made me cry!

Character development is good. Sam is so relatable! Plus I love how she still trusts Liam even after he raped her, I trusted him to and then when he screwed her over I was like “*huuuge gasp* LIAM! NOOOOOO”

When I started reading this story I thought it was just one of those cute cliche “fall for my abuser" type storylines. Then Sam’s problems and Harry’s flaws became evident, but that’s what made the story great, humans aren’t perfect, so why should the characters be any different?

Points to improve on

Considering the fact that Harry is an asshole to Sammie time and time again I am still confused as to why she agreed to be his fake girlfriend, twice, like I know I would never want to do someone who is horrible to me a favour.

Also I didn’t really see the point of the other boys. I get that they are all in one direction and everything but other than bullying Sammie they really didn’t affect the story.

I like how you have sayings and quotes in the titles of your chapters.

Spelling and grammar was good.

Overall rating 8/10

Would definitely recommend it (just make sure you have the tissues close by)

Notes

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