You Wanna Know?

I LOVED this so much.

Most stories on this website follow a similar storyline but yours is so different and unique which just made it that much more appealing. I loved how you have your own quirky style of writing.

I like how you made the characters grow yet they still kept their individual styles.

The flashbacks were so creative and made the story that much more interesting. I love how in each flashback you reveal a little more and a little more about Mickey’s past, while still not revealing the whole truth.

Wasn’t really much to improve on.

At the moment Mickey and Liam are a really cute couple and everything, just make sure you don’t cross the line into the kind of cliché, stereotypical romance if you know what I mean.

I noticed that you were getting a lot of hate on your story in the comments about the way that your writing. Babe, just ignore the haters cause your story is actually one of the best I have ever read, like I had no idea where it was going which made everything more intense and dramatic.

In the end I loved it girl so just keep doing what you’re doing!
~Sophalicious

Notes

Another review
SOOOO sorry to all the people whose reviews are way later than the promised date....
Will definitely get back to you soon!!