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tell me a lie

i loved you first...

tonight is date 5 and louis said he has something important to tell me and im worried. it could be something terrible, amazing or just average. but if i get to scared that is bad i will get nervous and panic but if its something average i want amazing then i will be disaponted. woah. pressure.

Louis arrived at my house this evening and took me into the car. when we arrived at the resturnat we were eating at louis took my hand and we walked into the resturant.i think he kne i was nervous. i hadn't spoke at all in the car and i could not look him in the eye. he took my hand and squeezed it tightly. he looked me in the eye and i looked away as he will see me panicking. he took his other hand and lifted my chin untill i met his eye. he then spoke.''right well hear goes.when me and niall first saw you on that beach in orlando i knew straight away i wanted to be the one to be there for you forever. i wanted to be the one you stayed with at night everynight. i wanted you to be the one rapped around you in the morning and i wanted to grow old with you. i loved you first. niall then realised my liking for you and got jelous. he then went to talk to you and then he took you. look he may of been with you but ever since i met you i believed in love at first sight.'' my expression had not chnaged. i was shocked and i was welling up. he took out a small box from his coat pocket and got down on the floor on one knee. he looked at me and opened the little box. ''rachel i love you with all my heart will you marry me''. i looked down at him now in floods. ''yes of course i will i love you so much'' i replied.

it had been a week since me and louis had been engaged and he hadnt left my side. we were going to have an engagement party this weekend where we announced it to the press. i was quite worried about this because it would be the first time seeing the boys in a year and we had to tell niall. i no he was happy with beth now but i dont no wether he had forgiven me yet.

it was thursday and me and louis had both taken the week off work to celebrate. today we went shopping. he was going to buy me my dress for our engagement party. we walked into a shop and a swarm of women ran towards us. they were all trying to get their pictures taken with louis. this did not bother me as much no more because i was used to it and had to be if we were going to get married. we went down to the dress section and we picked a few dresses. i tried them all on untill i found the most beautiful dress. it was red and a boob tube. it was beautiful. it was tight till the knees where ir puffed out at the bottom. at the hips it had a white sash which completes it. i had never seen anything so beautiful. i walked out of the changing room where louis was sat waiting for me. he stood up as soon as i walked out with his mouth open in shoch. ''thats the one'' he spoke. ''i no'' i replied. this was going to be the best engagement party in the world.

Notes

i hope you like the new one and i hope you like the fact rachel and louis are getting married xxxx

Comments

i dont no
Tell Me A Lie? Isn't There Another Story Called That?
Trust Love Trust Love
10/13/13
@NiallsGirlForever16

im running out of titles though
I love how the chapters are song titles

Awww!! He proposed!! :'D xx