Story Reviews

Definitely unique!

I honestly haven't read any other story with this storyline which is a great thing!

It was strange thinking of Luke as a father to 14 year old Emmmet even stranger that the mother was Arzaylea, I found it funny how you said her real name was Sammantha ;)

However, this story dealt with some serious issue alot of readers including myself could probably relate to such as online hate, struggles with identity, growing up with only one parent and self conciousness about your looks. I felt like you dealt with these really well with a realistic and well thought out storyline.

All spelling and structure was great :)

Only thing I would say is that Luke having to pay 'Sammantha' such large amounts of money to keep Emmet seems a bit unrealistic, but its fiction so never mind!

Overall rating: 8/10

Sorry for the wait! Much love xx

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