Story Reviews

Firstly, I know you didnt do the cover but it is gorgeous:)

Because you have only done three chapters, the review is shorter

I like the concept of your story, its original and keeps you interested, The murder of Ana s parents seems like it will be a background for your entire story.

The questions and suspense are definitely there so you wrote that chapter well :)

Who is Alec? And why has he kept Ana? Two questions I definitely want answers to, I also want to know what the justfiication for killling her parents could be.

I think youre writing style is great. Your spelling and grammar is mostly good, I did see one mistake 'given her a big hug' in the first chapter, I think you miakenly wrote given instead of giving, other than that I saw nothing.

Structure, all good ;) no chunks

I would reccomend this story, would like to see more chapters!

Hope this was helpful! Overall score:7/10
Jennifer x

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