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Higher Standards

Summary

Harry Styles is looking forward to spending a quiet holiday in London after One Direction has just finished up their tour and begun their much needed time off. Alyce (Uh-LEEs) Jardin is anything but quiet. Although she is charming, intelligent, and undeniably breathtaking, Alyce is complicated, completely selfless, and her philosophies on life and her spontaneous nature drive Harry almost insane. But nonetheless he finds himself wrapped up in the beautiful, complicated mess that is Alyce Jardin.



Alyce Jardin - 22 Years old - part time model and student. (Image is from Natasha Barnard's portfolio)


Harry Styles - 22 - No introduction necessary :)

Currently PG-13, for language and mature themes. Possibly may change to R later on due to intense themes and what not.

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Comments

@leah94rose
It's great, the only thing i would suggest is that you space your paragraphs out more- it makes it easier to read or to find your spot
- update soon!!
l.b.

leighhhbabyyy leighhhbabyyy
3/22/16

I've finally finished reading and now I can review!

I really liked the start of this with the setting being Post 1D and Harry supporting his sister. I'm always a sucker for Harry and Gemma interaction! The introduction of Alyce as well. She seems sassy and edgy and I think that's what intrigues Harry. I also like the fact that they haven't immediately clicked. A lot of fanfics make it so the girl and lead boy click right away but I think it makes it a bit of a challenge if they're not so crazy about each other from the start. What A Feeling is one of my favorites as well! I love the Fleetwood Mac sound and it gives me this sort of warm fuzzy feeling in the inside when I listen to it.

Your punctuation and grammar are on point! The only constructive criticism I can give is maybe to space out your lines a bit more. It kind of strains the eyes and makes certain things hard to read without the spaces.

This was great over all! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

CrumpetsAndTea CrumpetsAndTea
3/22/16

@leighbear28
Thank you so much! :) any constructive criticism or questions or comments are always appreciated :)

leah94rose leah94rose
3/22/16

Great work! Keep it up!
l.b.

leighhhbabyyy leighhhbabyyy
3/16/16
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